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When You See My Face...............*By Hibo*

SomaliNet Forum (Archive): General Discusions: Archive (Before Dec. 16, 2000): When You See My Face...............*By Hibo*
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Hibo

Sunday, November 05, 2000 - 09:09 pm
This is based on a story I JUST read...wow. well, I just kept writing as I
went...my guts spilled more than I intended them to...I thought I would share it with ya.....so be civilized n don't insult.....Comments n critizm r always wlc.......Enjoy it.


When you see my face.
___________________________________________________

These callused hands have a history..
You look at my picture on your computer screen..
And you say how beautiful...
How sweet...
I tell you my friend.
These callused hands have a history...
You see,
The picture doesnt show the pain my sould has lived.
My eyes have grown accustomed,
To living in this surrounding darkness.
You just see my face...a beautified mask..
You dont see the sweat,
That pours down my pores each day...
As I struggle to live each day...
You dont see the scabs on my rough small hands...
From the endless miles I travel....
Dont see the feet...
That I thank God have had no feeling since they were created.
You dont see that.
You dont see the small body,
That everyone deems as fragile.
When the only thing fragile..is my heart.
You dont see the pride that has been torn only to be rebuilt..
With walls around it.
You dont see the heart that has been broken too many times...
By the people that should of always been there.
You dont see the heart I almost threw away...
With a bottle of pills...
You dont see that.
You dont see the hands...
That tell of my being beaten...
Abused...
Neglected...
And torn.
Homeless...
Starving...
For love, attention, and a little more...I just dont know what.
You dont see the girl...
Who refused to believe she was worth loving...
Even by the one who created her in His image...
The Girl who thought she was God's first mistake....
You dont see that.
You dont see the girl who has never known what real love is like
Because everytime she relearned to trust...
She was rejected again.
You dont see the girl who was taunted..
By her peers, her church....the people she called family...
The girl who was told she would be nothing by those she trusted..
The girl who stood alone in that graduation hall...
Because those she had built up the nerve to invite
Despite her damn pride, decided it was not important,
That they show up.
The girl who graduatuated. Though many thought she would not..
So my friend,
Next time you see my picture,
Next time you see my face...
Look deeper...
Remember these calused hands tell a story...
And this wounded soul has a name...

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Anonymous

Monday, November 06, 2000 - 05:19 am
malay get life!!!!!!

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Somali_Yankee

Monday, November 06, 2000 - 06:18 am
ruurahaahay mee abii....:( tissue paper dee baajii...believe in the will and power of the human spirit.do in anyway can relate to the story personally or could yu relate to it as a somali woman?

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Hibo

Monday, November 06, 2000 - 08:06 am
Anon: having u as a bro.....is enough of a life.
SOmali Yankee: u bet I can......having Anon as a bro.......does it all for me......But yeah....I do feel left out...sometimes.

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dhukumbo

Monday, November 06, 2000 - 10:26 am
if i only knew
that she had a feeling
was worth looking beneath the surface
that she cries for love
acceptance of her church member
then i could go to the church leader
and tell him iam here for hibo
to show that we the mosque people
can show her the love
u church goers did not show
the girl who claimes
she was gods first mistake

i assure you the angles of god
are kneeling down right
infornt of their creator
crying and begging allah
to forgive his servant
that what she said
was not what she really believe

u have the right to be angry of those who made you feel the way you do, but i doubt you are alone, let it go, dont make me cry, what i wrote above is selective critisism, and unfair, but i had to.

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Anonymous

Monday, November 06, 2000 - 04:14 pm
hibo dheman, can u also write it in somali? i challenge u to do.........but over all u have GPA of 3.98 for that.......okay well done

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Basra

Monday, November 06, 2000 - 06:08 pm
Hibo Hibo Hibo Hibo

Girl we have to find you some happiness somewhere.God you make me teary! I dont fair well in sad poems. I'm not even lolling!

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Basra

Monday, November 06, 2000 - 06:12 pm
Buh Bye!

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Hibo

Monday, November 06, 2000 - 06:27 pm
Dhukumbo: what can I say ........Merci...Thnx bro..for that adorable poem....I loved it.
Anon: brotha....u really r full of amusements.. I see, u haven't had enough of me at home........even the net u keep following me.......what can I say.....Folks. I am blessed with a brotha so caring....But challenging me with Somali....man that is ur call..not mine....so now the challenge is on ya...convert this poem into Somali..
Basra: lol.......u stopped lolling sis... but u started buhhing........whats up with that anyways....I have already hated it......girl....I think u looked good with the loliing dress than this one......lol...........sis.. get me Happiness........I am desperate.........lol...

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Basra

Monday, November 06, 2000 - 06:48 pm
looooool Hibo

We just missed each other.Anyway girl SMILE* please please please.loooooooool nice poem,but because you've totally ruined my night,i'll give your poem 3/10 looooooool buh byee looooool

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Hibo

Tuesday, November 07, 2000 - 03:52 am
Basra: how so.....sis...? I am totally...mad now..like mad cow.............lol......Tell me plssss.....how I ruined ur nite.....maybe I can Undo the Hurting........if possible...???...N Plss....no Buh byes..I beg u

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SALSA

Tuesday, November 07, 2000 - 05:19 am
HIBO PLEASE SIS, THIS IS SO DEPRESSING.

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Anonymous

Tuesday, November 07, 2000 - 08:04 am
dheman........please translate it to somali.....aniga af ingriiska si fiican uma aqaan okay.............aniga kaligeyna maaha flight-13 oo dhan waaye ee noo fasir.......@@@@@LOL@@@@@

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Somali-Yankee

Tuesday, November 07, 2000 - 01:37 pm
Hibo....never let people's rudeness n harshness get to yu....believe me yu are not da only one who
feels being left out at times.....everybody can relate to your story not just yu...yu just gotta prove your critics wrong.

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Anonymous

Wednesday, November 08, 2000 - 06:06 pm
When I see your face is the day I will die from laughter.

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Hibo

Thursday, November 09, 2000 - 04:41 am
Salsa: what can i say... i was depressed when i wrote that.....
Anon: lol....Mohamadov.....basholti...waaxid... cifriid... adaa eh inaa noo macneesid.. not me.. Plus u know how to say.. get a life.. n translate.. i wonder what else u know of english...lol.. hey folks...this is MY BROTHA... My older Bro.. isn't he nice... being there for me.. even in the net....
Somali yankee: I never let anyone get to my nerves...thought my brotha here can be a pain in the A** sometimes....but he is the best we can ask for...
Anon:....lol... I am sure u will lead me....coz.. I don't know the way.....

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wisdom

Monday, November 20, 2000 - 08:46 pm
to Hibo:

wow that was deep...crying out loud...does someone have a spare tissue...give me a used one too.

hibo that was a nice poem...was that how u felt when u were growing up...i feel your pain...u should have posted your pic next to the poem.

but i didn't like the line that said:
"i thought i was God's first mistake... whatever ...there is something big wrong with that line...from Islamic point of view

the poem was very deep and touching and it moved me emotionally...it also made me look at things differently. and by the way Hibo i like how handle the fun spoilers or anti poets (call them whatever u want)...i gotta give u props for that...

hibo i am a poet too...and being a poet, i can understand how u feel when u were writing this poem...is there a way we can get together and work on poetry...i need help writing depressing poems...but i am alright in other fields specially nature(looooooooooooooooooooool)
i am a gifted poet...when i walk i see poetry... when i sleep i dream about poetry...when i look in the sky i see poetry in the air...poetry is all around me

peace
my future partner in poetry

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londoner

Wednesday, November 22, 2000 - 07:39 am
Leave the girl alove, that is a joke babe.

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wisdom

Wednesday, November 22, 2000 - 09:36 am
to londoner:

for the sake of poetry, pls don't come in between me and hibo

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T-GIRL

Friday, November 24, 2000 - 09:22 pm
Hibo.......
Stop making me all Weepy girl....I haven't cried since my mama refused to buy me a happy meal the other day....Great poem though....Keeep it up sister and Cheer up........Life is what U make of it......Hibo Thanx for yo mail girl.......Ahhh very thoughfull of ya

Hello Basra
Thanx for your lovely mail.......I couldn't stop laughing over the Pyjamas in front of TV part...coz U just described my typical day at home.

PEACE
Trouble

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Mercutio-

Saturday, November 25, 2000 - 04:39 am
HIBO THIS IS DEPRESSING SIS!!!!!

PUT AN END TO IT FOR THE SAKE OF MY HAPPINESS.

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Mercutio-

Saturday, November 25, 2000 - 04:46 am
OUChhhhhhhhhhhhh ALMOST FORGOT.

WISDOM YOU SMOOTH NIGGA.

'other fields especially nature' ARE WE TALKING ABOUT LANDSCAPE GARDENING- THE ORCHID FLOWERS OR JUST THE BEAUTIFUL SCOTTISH MOUNTAINS.

AM A CATHERINE COOKSON FAN MYSELF, LOVE READING HER BOOKS.

IF YOU SHARE MY INTREST CAN WE GET TOGETHER (NOT YOU WISDOM - HIBO-T-GIRL-BASRA) THE REAL LADIES FROM charlies angels.

QUESTION???

GOOD MORNING MERCUTIO:

GOOD MORNING BASRA-HIBO- TANK GIRL

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Hibo

Saturday, November 25, 2000 - 06:58 pm
Wisdom: thnx bro.. I would surely love to comment on ur poems... poetry to me is a passion... u can say... I worship the thing....(poetry)... so u can write here or anywhere.. I will be more than glad... to add my two cents..
Londoner: looooooooooool... u mean t leave the girl aloof...coz.. I don't know about "alove"..or u meant a love... as love...lol..just kidding bro..
T_girl:looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool....................sis.... happy meal... I don't remember when I got happy meal........I guess having to spend my childhood in Somalia... I never knew anything about happy meals...all I ate was " canbuulo...iyo sabuul galeey".....
Mercutio:looooooooooooooooooooool......bro.. Charlie's angels.. r really infected everyone.. alike.. male or female.. shows real girl power.. ha?.......lol.. About ur happiness... I would suggest u fetch it somewhere else.........coz.. this home of mine........has been gloomy for long.....N won't fade away now...so try to bare...aight!

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wisdom

Sunday, November 26, 2000 - 07:41 pm
to T-girl:

couldn't u thank them in private or by mail

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wisdom

Sunday, November 26, 2000 - 08:48 pm
damn...i forgot the important part

to hibo:

no thanks...i decided to keep my poetry to myself instead of sharing it with these anti poets...and pls leave other ppl's poetry alone...atleast wait for the copy right to expire

to mercutio:

wow that was good man...u know how to deal with girls...u gotta talk to them about boring stuff like books and soap operas and depressing poetry,
...

and to all those who r taking notes:

don't forget that girls r boring and they like to talk about boring stuff...so if any one of u wants to get with a girl don't talk to her about interesting stuff coz that's the end and u won't be getting $hit

peace out peoples
and keeping on taking down notes coz the wise one will only be here once a week unlike u all

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CoolPoison

Sunday, November 26, 2000 - 09:47 pm
Pissdom, so you access Somalinet from an Internet-Cafe?!!! Huh?!! lol. It must be very costing you a fortune for you to post bullshit on these boards.

Poison.

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Hibo

Monday, November 27, 2000 - 05:41 am
Wisdom: I thought somewhere there was something different about ur approach that made u worthy of my attention......but alas....just another typical Somali......all ready to judge. Whats up with the presumpsions?.. I wonder..:(.. U might have seen my postings in foriegn sites... but that doesn't give u the rite to assume the worst...copyright! I wonder who sets those..the writers or the readers?

N hey just for the record..before u judge .. be the reason!

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wisdom

Monday, November 27, 2000 - 11:35 am
to poison:

when i said i only contribute to these discussions only once a week it doesn't mean i don't have an access to a computer...it means that i don't have time to waste... unlike u i don't post crappy messages 24/7.u already made me break my visiting days...but just to prove a fool like u wrong i'll do anything

u think every one is like u addicted to this discussions, no no everyone is busy doing something...

so pls get a job or school or any thing and on your way get a life too
and this page is for poetry...if u wanna chase t-girl around this is not the place...

to hibo:
i am sorry i didn't turn out to be who u expected i was...but this is me...this is how i am...i was just playing with u when i was talking about poetry...u should have figured it out for yourself
...and for your information - how can a reader set the copy right?...the whole reason for copy rights is to protect it from the readers from copying it

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wisdom

Monday, November 27, 2000 - 11:51 am
to every one:

don't be mad at poison for posting shitty messages here, he does it coz he got nothing else to do...the worst part is that he thinks every one is like him...so pls don't be mad at him...show him some love...if he doesn't get love here where is gonna get it from

to poison:

don't take advantage of every one feeling sorry for u just coz u r mentally handicapped

to hibo:

sorry for changing your topic it won't happen again

peace out
and have a good AFUR

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HANNA

Monday, November 27, 2000 - 12:43 pm
TO WISDOM.

YOU ARE SWEET. BUT IS RAMADAN TRY TO BE KIND TO EACHOTHER EVEN IF YOU HATE EACHOTHER THANK YOU.

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Hibo

Monday, November 27, 2000 - 01:29 pm
Wisdom: well! who do we have here?........If u think u could play games with this girl.......sorry to say....u r on the side of the field bro. N for ur information.. I do who sets the copyrights...just a sarcacism u so vividly missed....:O
Let me just say this..........Learn to walk b4 u run aight!
Peace.

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wisdom

Monday, November 27, 2000 - 04:15 pm
to hibo:

how am i playing games?...and don't make me read between the lines just tell things the way they r... what does "u r on the side of the field" mean...r u trying to get me back for saying u steal poetry from other pages...hibo DON'T EVER TAKE ANYTHING I SAY SERIOUSLY...I AM NEVER SERIOUS

to hanna:

"sweet" is not a good word to describe a man...but thanks alot though...u meant it in a good way...and i don't hate nobody...i post messages just for the fun of it

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CoolPoison

Monday, November 27, 2000 - 04:38 pm
Pissdom, how much did your last three postings cost?..lol...what a world....accesing somalinet from an internet-cafe.

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wisdom

Monday, November 27, 2000 - 05:55 pm
to poison:

it cost me a fortune that's why i am still in the cafe...they even serve afur

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manexe

Monday, November 27, 2000 - 06:00 pm
manexe=wisdom

i forgot to add that i see u there every time i go...u even eat suxuur there...i have seen u sleeping at the door step of the cafe too...the worst part is that all the time u r in the cafe u r in somalinet...man i am willing to donate my extra computer to u...i wanna get my ajar in this holly month

just to prove u wrong i'll be answering every message u post tonight...just for tonight though

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CoolPoison

Monday, November 27, 2000 - 06:31 pm
Pissdom you say <<just to prove u wrong i'll be answering every message u post tonight...>>

You no longer care for your pocket and time? I have just eaten suxuur and I am not going back to sleep! Do you think you will stay awake untill iftar time (in london 4pm)? .... btw...make sure you go to a 24hr internet-cafe

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wisdom

Monday, November 27, 2000 - 08:16 pm
to poison:

damn u have no life...u post messages at 4 am...no wonder u r in England, u were saying bloody whatever...it is 1 a.m. at T.O. (toronto)right now...poison u won man...u won...i can't compete with a man/woman/or inbetween who got nothing else to do other than posting messages...i was a fool to play your game...poison u won...i won't be replying to your messages coz we r not in the same category...U DO THIS FOR LIFE AND I DO THIS FOR FUN ONCE A WEEK OR TWICE IN A NON-BUSY WEEK...so pls go look for someone who is in the same category as u...and respect other ppl when they open their own pages...don't turn every thing around...we know u do this for life but u gotta respect other people

to myself (the wise one):

i can't believe how stupid i was trying to beat poison at his game...not even game it is his LIFE
...damn sometimes i wonder whether i am really deserve to be called wisdom or not
oh s.h.i.t. i wasn't supposed to type that part, oh well who cares

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a_poet_called_wisdom

Monday, November 27, 2000 - 08:28 pm
to hibo:

u should have posted your pic next to the poem so ppl can understand it well...i once wrote a poem about the sky at night and i had the picture of a sky with the stars and every thing next to the poem and i luckily got a shooting star in my pic...and every one could relate to it...trust me ppl will understand it alot better when u post your pic...when ppl read my poem with the pic they were like "oh wisdom, wisdom, u truly r the wise one when it comes to every thing"

ok enough of bragging about myself...but it is good if u have your pic coz in your poem it talks about how your pic doesn't show what u came through in life...how r we supposed to know that without your pic being there

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CoolPoison

Monday, November 27, 2000 - 09:26 pm
Pissdom, I accept your offer to concede the tussle. At least you are more reasonable than Al Gore.

BTW...I do have a full life. Figure out for yourself why I am in cyberspace 24/7.

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Hibo

Tuesday, November 28, 2000 - 03:17 am
Wisdom: knowing how to fill in the gabs is nature's best way of selection...so work on that.
Pic.. my pic.. what am I on sale here?...Sorry man...I won't be advertizing myself....plus... this poetry was based on a book i read.. seems like u have missed that one too... man u need to read between the lines to comprehend my writing... Critical reading is the KEY!

Coolpoison: :O

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an_author_called_wisdom

Tuesday, November 28, 2000 - 07:20 am
to hibo:

wow u read books...that must be fun...

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Hibo

Tuesday, November 28, 2000 - 07:31 am
Wisdom: pls.. come up with better critism ....this one is somewhat out of fashion... u know "NOT COOL" any more!

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a_critique_called_wisdom

Tuesday, November 28, 2000 - 09:13 am
to hibo:

so reading books is "cool" huh...well keep on reading as books as u can and we'll see how many ppl say "oh hibo u r so cool can i be your friend?"

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Hibo

Tuesday, November 28, 2000 - 10:28 am
Wisdom: Was it my eyes that lied to me or u said.. u had better things to do than surf the net 24/7 unlike the rest of us? ..Oh yeah u said, "Never Take me Serious" .. Sorry my bad!

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Hibo

Tuesday, November 28, 2000 - 10:30 am
Oh I almost forgot.. READING is Cool!
Just for the record: I choose my friends I just don't make them for the heck of it.. so relax bro.

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wisdom

Tuesday, November 28, 2000 - 10:44 am
to hibo (Miss Perfect or whatever):

i was having that argument with poison not u...u just work on your poetry and novels Miss Perfect
...and for your information i am proving to poison that every one doesn't go to internet cafes like him to surf the net
so i am out now...and don't expect me to post my wise messages any more coz i am out

hibo: u need to come back to reality Miss Perfect who reads novels and likes poetry is just a character in movies and soap operas...so come back to reality

that's is my least piece of wisdom...hibo i know the truth hurts...but someone has to say it...we can't be lying to each other every time

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Anonymous

Tuesday, November 28, 2000 - 11:21 am
dheman i am still waiting the translation please in somali. aniga me no ingriiis nooh!!!

P.S> aniga walaalkaa ma ihi waa i taqanaa lakin maxamed ha igu qaldin yaah.

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Hibo

Wednesday, November 29, 2000 - 07:01 am
Wisdom: Lol.. bro.. walahi u r a maniac.....lollllll........MIss perfect: I wish I was...........loooooool... lol... U know maybe I am.. coz.. I have my acts together!.. U can't even decide on a nick...for urself? When someone is wise... he doesn't criticize... but presents his arguments without hassles.. U know.. if u think I am in middle school... n would be mad when someone says.. u r a nerd.. U can let that down the drain.. coz.. the world we livein is about EDUCATION... which u can get through READING? So relax bro.....let the BP drop... or get some tear n wear...frustrations in life... can get messy... don't let it make u.......

ANON: loooooool... u can hide bro...but u can't run... U forgot probably I live with ya.. Mohamadov!!!!

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CoolPoison

Wednesday, November 29, 2000 - 08:25 pm
Pissdom, is Hibo = Basra? I am just wondering.

Second, I have not written anything on this boards from the time you raised the white flag. This I did basically to show you that I really have a life away from SomNet.

Thirdly, don't you think you were stretching the truth a bit when you told us you were just an ordinary sunday visitor to SomNet?

Lastly, is it too much of a favour if we (your readers) decided on whether what you write here is wisdom or pure shitt?

Enjoying Ramadan.

Poison.

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a_mathematician_called_wisdom

Friday, December 01, 2000 - 11:52 am
to poison:

man don't make me come back here again...u can diss me by saying i write •••• and whatever u want...but when u say:
wisdom=hibo=basra
man u have crossed the line...i think u used the wrong formula to find it out

u were supposed to use E=MC^2 but u used 1+1=1

man, get your formulas right

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187

Friday, December 01, 2000 - 12:26 pm
Hibo, if u could discribe your face and body littlebit more, i'll will take you and love u for the rest of your live. but i think people u were in love with denied u, cuz mybe u not that good looking. anyway,,,,,,,let me get the hook up...

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Hibo

Friday, December 01, 2000 - 04:07 pm
187: How much more clarity do u need to understand this poem.......n its originality!..
Folks for the last time........."ITS NOT ABOUT ME"...........Its about a girl in a book I read..I maybe the author of this poem.......but certainly NOT the true character....God...Go back to reading classes..... learn to read between lines.....
Posoin: I thought u were cool.......but looking at ur commentz....in my sites ....u nothing but a ........na.. Its Ramadan.. i will let it slide for now!

Wisdom: Seems like u r doing great in ur physics homework......Good Job...:O

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Daacad

Monday, December 11, 2000 - 10:48 am
Nice!

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Omar

Monday, December 11, 2000 - 11:40 am
Balo aan ku hayn looma yeerto, haddii ay ku haysana Iiman ayaa la yeeshaa oo calaacalka waa la iska yareeyaa. Ninkii heesay wuxuu yiri
" Ogow Hohi kuma bogsiiso(kuma caafimaadido), hamigu walwal kaama bi'iyo, calaacal wax kuuma keeno"
Iimaan ha layeesho, galaadan qalbiga maran yaan lugu dayan. Dhibaato dadka waa ku dhacdaa; Muslim iyo Gaalaba. Lakiin Muslimku waa ku sabraa Ajar ayuuna ka helaa. Nin Somali ah oo gabyaa/heesaa ahaa, ayaa markasta wuxuu ku heesi jiray dhibaato ku dhacday,iyo mushkulad ku furantay, asagoon waxba qabin. Ilaahay wuxuu qadaray in dhibaatadii uu ku heesi jiray si dhab ah ugu dhacday oo uu ku dhintay. Taasi waxay ku tusaydaa in ay fiicantahay in nicmada Ilaahay lugu shukriyo, dhibaatadana lugu sabro.sHaddii ay hibaatadu ku hayso, Allah hakaa sahlo, Sabir iyo iimaanna haku siiyo. Haddii ay sheeko xarrir kaa tahayna, walaal waxyaala kale oo laga sheekeeyo ayaa badan. I hope you can read Somali
Ramadan Kareim to All

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Lady Jane

Monday, December 11, 2000 - 12:40 pm
To Hibo:

I must say that I'm glad that I visited this page because I really enjoyed the poem regardless as to whose life it pertains to.Nevetheless,it was a colourful depiction of the human spirit,hope and how they join forces to combat the struggles and strife of every day life.I am still a little taken aback by its great merit and though just few lines on my screen..they have the power to show shed much light on one's own life and experiences!So forget about your less appreciative fans and keep doing whatever it is you gain strength from and what works for you!!
Only you know what's best for you!

It was THOUGHT PROVOKING
It was ELECTRIFYING
It was SENTIMENTAL
It was THOUGHTFUL
It was BEAUTIFUL
It was UNABASHED
It was ORIGINAL
It was CREATIVE
It was HONEST
It was BLUNT
It was DEEP

It was ABOUT TIME!!!!

Until next time peace,love and craziness to you all!

Lady Jane aka Muna.

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Anonymous

Monday, December 11, 2000 - 12:47 pm
When people say life is hard,
then I'm tempted to say compared to what??

yes what you have written sis, is a sad story but true and you have to realiase tha experiences like that are thoose who are changing you as a human being, and when you write that you are mistake that God have maken then sis you have reached the bottom and I say it's about time that you seek your way to the faith, it's from the belive and the love to allah you regain strength,

yes, I as a girl can relate to your story If I have get it right, you are saying or pleeding to the guys to see below the surface, beauty is only skin deep but heart and soul are a never ending deep, you whant them to see who you are, and that is understandable sis, but don't base your life on this misfortune you has experianced,live life and take a day at time and ,

from your sis Jamiila

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Anonymous

Monday, December 11, 2000 - 01:11 pm
Ok I'v read between the lines and I'm sorry
I just didn't get it at the first time, but now I do and your cool sis

jamiila

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Hibo

Monday, December 11, 2000 - 03:32 pm
Thnx Daacad..
Omar: Soomaali waa aqrin karaa waana qori karaa....sxb.....laakiinse wacdiga aa bixinoosid...waa fahmi waayey........ya meeshaan joogo oo calaacalaya sxb??

Lady Jane: wow...sis.. i must say poetry runs in our genes......ur last few sentences was provoking...great.. loved them!

Anon Jamiila: thnx....sis.. I guess u found out the truth later.......lol.. sis..I loved the u turn...lol..

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