BOQOR | Monday, November 20, 2000 - 06:29 pm Upon This Silk is your Skin As my fingers Touch you withen You Close your eyes, U mesmerize As My Tongue slips between your Thighs A Breath released, As your Body is pleased As I Rub and Touch you baby with Ease Your Body relaxed, as I enter upon your Lap Spread through your thighs, as I find Thy' Destination like a Map Kissing your Lips, Hands on your hips Massaging your Tits' with Just the right licks Moving up and Down, Aroused Upon this Silky Ground All is heard is the the soft Groaning sound Your Voice echoes through the air As I look into your eyes and Stare Lieing here all is bare This is True Love In Which is Rare. |
GIRL | Tuesday, November 21, 2000 - 12:12 am GO AND HAVE A COLD SHOWER!!! |
Poisonous | Tuesday, November 21, 2000 - 01:30 am Briliantly tasteless. Nothing rhymes. Hell there no rythym at all. .....a case of back to school.... |
DEEQA | Tuesday, November 21, 2000 - 08:24 am wooooooooow, i must say this is the cleverst most skillfull peom i have seen. so to the point yet so romantic. other people's peoms usually have nothing to do with humen nature, they're about flowers land scapes mybe little outside beuty of the person. but this one is about evalution and the real thing.....it's realy kool bro,,,,, YOU DON'T NEED TO WRITE LIKE RYME, THIS IS POEM, NOT A LYRICS,,,, WELL DONE BRO |
Anonymous | Tuesday, November 21, 2000 - 09:10 am looooooooooooool...what's romantic about that...it is romantic for porn stars |
Anonymous | Tuesday, November 21, 2000 - 10:07 am anonymous I agree,this is not a poem.Gross! Can someone show me the exit door please? |
Miss-Understood | Friday, November 24, 2000 - 09:47 pm Insulting SOMALI GIRLS again R WE?? So what's NEW? |
Old-fashion-girl | Saturday, November 25, 2000 - 08:07 am hey people was that suppose to be a poem ....or it is a peace of an erotic novel huh? |
CAYNI | Tuesday, November 28, 2000 - 11:45 pm beleive me if someone from banadir reads this hhmmmmmmm i am sure he will grab the soap and rush to the toilet and we all know what they will be doing there! |
girl_at_ease | Wednesday, November 29, 2000 - 07:31 am that wasn't bad, coming from a somali brother. if what you say is true, if you can work on that like that, then boy show me the way to the waiting line. |