     Basra | Tuesday, January 23, 2001 - 06:19 am
* A Crush *
It could be an accident pending,
or a love sending
It could be building collapsing
or a heart crunching
It could be two cars racing
or a heart beat gazing
It could be an object crushing down
or maybe i have a crush for him
It could be a moment of rushing
or maybe his atire so dashing
It could a serious catastrophe plane crush
or wait-maybe a delirious love crush
It could be his eyes or that suit,
or it could my sweet apple fruit
It could be the voice or the cologne,
or perhaps the simple smile,
It could be that next street car crush,
or maybe i have a crush on him!
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| Anonymous | Tuesday, January 23, 2001 - 06:26 am
Basra this poem is so lame only U could have written it, girl poems either have meaning OR rhyme but if it has neither then it is nothing but lame! |
| Hibo | Tuesday, January 23, 2001 - 07:49 am
Basra: I really liked ur poem sis.unlike this anon looser!! Isn't it amazing hwo ur feelings play games on u.,... when u claim to have liked someone.... |
