Basra | Tuesday, January 23, 2001 - 06:19 am * A Crush * It could be an accident pending, or a love sending It could be building collapsing or a heart crunching It could be two cars racing or a heart beat gazing It could be an object crushing down or maybe i have a crush for him It could be a moment of rushing or maybe his atire so dashing It could a serious catastrophe plane crush or wait-maybe a delirious love crush It could be his eyes or that suit, or it could my sweet apple fruit It could be the voice or the cologne, or perhaps the simple smile, It could be that next street car crush, or maybe i have a crush on him! ******************************** |
Anonymous | Tuesday, January 23, 2001 - 06:26 am Basra this poem is so lame only U could have written it, girl poems either have meaning OR rhyme but if it has neither then it is nothing but lame! |
Hibo | Tuesday, January 23, 2001 - 07:49 am Basra: I really liked ur poem sis.unlike this anon looser!! Isn't it amazing hwo ur feelings play games on u.,... when u claim to have liked someone.... |