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OUR LAND IS CRYING (MY MIND AND BODY WREAKED IN SORROW)

SomaliNet Forum (Archive): Somali Women's Forum: Archive (Before Mar. 13, 2001): OUR LAND IS CRYING (MY MIND AND BODY WREAKED IN SORROW)
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UkMan9

Monday, February 19, 2001 - 10:34 am
Somalia

Life pulses throughout Her land,
Covered by rich harvest and fertile beauty -
Time as deep as ocean and as infinite as sand rippling harmony and
complexity; Her duty
Her life and wisdom rides the breeze,
As her mercy and strength evaporates.

War and meaningless death - what extinction it creates.
Her rivers of life are running dry
As She watches Her children lead Her to die.
She feels the gentle wind of Her own failing breath,
And from Her eye a final tear does glisten.
It saddens Her to know we orbit our own death.
We've always known the way - her voice; if only we would listen

this is me and my sorrows

I see me sitting sadly in the corner
Knees drawn up tightly to my chest.
Mind and body wreaked in sorrow
As tears course down my face.
I look at me with narrowed eyes
Pitying the sorry creature I have become.
I look into my wretched soul
Cursing the emptiness inside.
Emptiness put there by my own Somalian people.
As I stand over the huddling form of myself
I see I have gotten what I deserved from life.
I had no right to the beautiful love we shared
When the love rightfully belonged to her.
Sadly I watch the shell of myself slowly cracking
Oozing out all the pain and misery within my soul.
There on top of all the shattered pieces
Lay my beating heart, all alone.

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Hafsah

Monday, February 19, 2001 - 11:12 am
UkMan9 what r u man! u make me cry i can't stop crying.
UkMan9 i wanna know u as a bro so plzzzz can u let me know u. give me ur email if u dont mind i am still crying........

i wish every somali men can see that way.

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UkMan9

Monday, February 19, 2001 - 11:30 am
My beloved Somali people let us make a decision and do some thing...

We come from a turbulent past
To an info-age moving way to fast
The fate of these lands
Is now placed in our hands

Will we bring destruction to an end
Will we have the power to mend
Save this fragile dreamland
Wash away our footprints in the sand

Every day go through their daily motions
Waiting it out for measly promotions
Distant stares and silent prayers
Monday to Friday . . . say goodbye

The victims of greed are getting younger
In a world that still allows their hunger
Our petty problems make us hang down our heads
While million's go unfed

Desire unfolds the light of our day
But we cannot give in to the subtle decay
We must rise above the haze descending
Toward mass action mending

We must take control of our actions today
or the children of tomorrow will be the one's to pay
The new innkeepers shall soon take charge
of the next generation’s voyage at large

Trends are patterned and patterns trended
But man's damage must be ended!

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Somalisis

Monday, February 19, 2001 - 12:10 pm
I think am in love with this guy UkMan9 hey what do u do? how old r u and r u good looking looooooool u r sooooo gooooood man gosh

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Anonymous

Monday, February 19, 2001 - 12:22 pm
u see this is why I hate somaliwomen

this brother is talking about the situation in our beloved country

and they are more concerened with his look

how pathetic

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UkMan9

Monday, February 19, 2001 - 01:18 pm
Watch as this tear falls into empty space
See it fall into life's nameless place
Can you see the sparkle as it catches the light
That sparkle once was happiness that is no longer in sight
As it falls watch it, its color has changed
From blue to bright red, it has a wide range

There it goes all alone, it continues to fall
With it, it takes the emotion, the emotion of all
Wait, can you hear it? A sob has broke free
Has shook the lungs cold, but yet it continues to be
Here it comes, a force has been built between the eye
A wall of shear water, it's now time to cry

A shudder, a scream, darkness envelops your soul
The darkness of the night has taken its toll

night = war in this poem if u know what i mean

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UkMan9

Monday, February 19, 2001 - 01:22 pm
without country where do I fit in?

spinning out of control
my mind is always spinning

shimmers of pain and confusion
dominate my every thought

I can't handle it
it can devour me at an instant

when, where, why?
questions I ask everyday

limbo is my residence
madness is my destination

is this it?
this is all I'm supposed to be

where do I fit in?
or do I fit in?

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UkMan9

Monday, February 19, 2001 - 03:27 pm
No one hears me, understands me
I speak in silence
hoping that someone will see my words, my message
hoping to find peace, it has arrived so divine
I wish for a stronger, better life
filled with everlasting touch
I dream the future, but hold the past
My body is brimmed with so many confusions
Am I really here experiencing fullness?
I must be, the pain is so real
the hurt I feel could never be imagined
but I will pull through into greatness
and destroy whatever faces into me
As I struggle I will fight until the end
Whenever it may come

that is what I feel my Bro and sis....... is there anyone out there have the same feeling as me!!

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Anonymous

Monday, February 19, 2001 - 06:38 pm
CAN U JUST ANSWER WHAT SOMALISIS ASKED U?.

ONE MORE THING NO BODY HAVE THE SAME FEELING OK.

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UkMan9

Tuesday, February 20, 2001 - 02:59 am
hey Anonymous looooool r u interesting too how I look oh lord..... if u insist I am ugly run away from meeeee I am a beast xuuuuuuuuuuuuuux

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VAwoman

Tuesday, February 20, 2001 - 05:25 am
The pain of a mother
whose breast milk has run dry

The pain of a father
unable to provide cornmeal

The pain of a child
"mommy, why does it hurt so much"

The bullets of a drugged out youth
no one understands their intent

The war-cry of a leader
sending thousands to their untimely death

The land- forgotten and barren
The people- hungry and tired
The children- dying.

The scars fresh
The wounds deep
The shrouds weep.

UKman9- such is our tale, too sad to tell.
Such is our destiny,
such is our homeland, that once was.

I feel your pain when I remember the sands of our shores,
I feel your pain when I think back to star-filled skies of our home,
I feel the hole where once was my soul.

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AnotherVa.woman

Tuesday, February 20, 2001 - 08:10 am
I feel like crying.....somebody close the door.. and get me a diet coke on your way back!

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ReaLdeaL

Tuesday, February 20, 2001 - 10:34 am
The Sky is a different shade of blue !
The atmosphere is full of death and Gloom !

Why have they turned against me,, She wonders !
How can I stop this Misery she ponders !

They abadoned me when I needed them Most !

Where art thou my people !
Where art thou my children.

Somalia is crying for thee !

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UkMan9

Tuesday, February 20, 2001 - 01:46 pm
A thunderous silence
breaks through my thoughts.
What was once many great ideas
is now a triumph, lost.

Baffling words tumble through my mind.
Reflections of darkness hover.
A disturbing peacefulness beckons to me,
and inside myself, I take cover.

What would it be like to stay there forever?
To be lost in all my cares?
From the inside, looking out -
I cry silent tears.

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UkMan9

Tuesday, February 20, 2001 - 02:07 pm
Broken tooth
From fist once loved
Scars in unseen ways.

Trust betrayed
Inflicted harm
Lost in emotions maze

Respect denied
Flows both ways
Diminishing esteem.

Sadness seeps
To aching marrow
Laughs a far off dream

Soul deep anger
Smoulders darkly
Sustaining life long pain

Time groans on
Fades memory
Deep wounds, though,

Still remain.

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Anonymous

Tuesday, February 20, 2001 - 02:12 pm
ukman9
stop carrying and do something. we all know we do not have a country and people so what should we do? sit and cry like an old lady?

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Saynab

Tuesday, February 20, 2001 - 02:25 pm
My emotions pick up power and speed
Then break and smash and explode at my heart.
The great surges of my feelings impede
All that's consciously right. I start to cry.
Every tear sends waves of unseen feelings
Through the hidden surface of our lives.
They roll and fall until all love is gone,
All life is lived, and each feeling explored.

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UkMan9

Tuesday, February 20, 2001 - 02:35 pm
The sun used to shine on me,
there used to be a fluffily clouded sky.
I knew about something called happy.
I always knew just where I wanted to be.

That sun is gone,
replaced by night.
those clouds now carry low thunder,
I only know misery and fright
and I don't even recognize me.

Somewhere in between
something got forgotten and lost
the key to my soul
was replaced by a lock.

I can tell of the deep, dull crevice
I have let myself crawl into
but no one has asked.
If it were wished,
I would count the cold tears I've shed
but none of it would matter,
there would still be
the lost happy I don't remember

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Haaheey

Tuesday, February 20, 2001 - 02:42 pm
Desolation,
Wide open space,
Between the trees and me,
Emptiness and me,
Confusion and decisions,
Feelings hard to define,
And I say to myself,
Just a little longer,

Coldness seeps
It's way in,
I am falling deeper,
Into what I fear most,
As I reach out,
There is nothing there,
As possible there was something once,
Only to be gone,
And I say to myself,
Just a little longer,

The sun drops,
The last inch of light falls,
The squirrels more likely to be huddled up,
But not me,
Something I never possessed,
And I say to myself,
Just a little longer,

Then the sun has gone,
Darkness spreads its wings over me,
I see nothing so no one sees me,
Feeling of bitterness only,
And I say to myself,
Just a little longer,

An Owl peers down,
With question in her eyes,
She doesn't have a hope,
In helping me,
As she doesn't see my pain,
Spreads her wings,
Passes me by,
And I say to myself,
Just a little longer,

The soft earth,
Seems the only thing holding me up,
Even then I could slip,
And wondering takes me,
To why and how I got here,
Without even knowing it,
Yet no one notices,
As they didn't see before,
So I say to myself,
Just a little longer,

Shimmering in the darkness,
I see two moons,
Reflecting off a stream of thoughts,
Ongoing forever more,
Along a rocky road,
Slowly giving in to finding a way out,
I take the plunge under the river,
Then the wind carries a whisper,
Gently on a breeze,
'Just a little longer.'

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Haaheey

Tuesday, February 20, 2001 - 02:54 pm
I look up
as a tear rolls slowly
down my cheek
I think about better days
and wonder if I'll feel that way again
you look at me
with those eyes I know so well
always serious, so deep and insightful
as though you're always in control
But not today
not now
Now you look so scared
like for once you don't have the answer
I gaze at you
looking deep into those hazel eyes
Hoping to understand
why those things happened to you my land
I wonder for a moment
if this is all a dream
if I shall wake in the morning
and be relieved
you look at me
with a confusion I have never seen
slowly pull me towards you
and wipe the tears from my cheek

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UkMan9

Tuesday, February 20, 2001 - 03:48 pm
Hey Anonymous

I work so hard to deal with this thing,
The fact that I have it and the problems it brings.

So when I finally get control of this flaw,
Everyone around me seems to watch me in awe.

I never learn why it’s happened to us,
And we must work that much harder to make dreams come true.

But what’s happened has happened, and it’s now part of life
So why give up in yourself, why live with such strife.

The best you can do is fight back twice as hard,
Just be careful, make right choices and play the right cards.

As they say what doesn’t kill you can only make you stronger,
It’s been here for awhile, it’ll be here for a while longer.

So why can’t people see past this technicality,
Having problems with my life is now my specialty.

I should have a master’s degree in what to do,
So please don’t treat me any different, I’m just the same as you.

When people have pity it just makes me feel sad,
Do you think it makes me feel better, well it makes me so mad.

I can’t stand the fact that people look at me and stare,
What you don’t think I can see you, oh I know you’re there.

I know what I can, and cannot do,
So why try to stop me, it’s not up to you.

If I want to cry my ass off until death,
Let it be that way, let me use my last breath.

I’d rather go through life living, even if it is in pain,
Rather then sitting all day, slowly going insane.

So now that you know just how it has to be,
Are you going to do some thing, or just complain.

I don’t care what you think is the best thing to do,
If you can’t support me and my choices, then the heck with you.

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Anonymous

Tuesday, February 20, 2001 - 07:48 pm
I AM CRYING SOMEBODY GIVE ME TOWEL TO WIPE MY TEARS.

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SAD SIS

Tuesday, February 20, 2001 - 07:57 pm
UKBRO I WISH IF I KNOW U.EVERY DAY I WOULD JUST LISTEN UR POIMS.BUT 2 BAD I AM NOT THAT LUCKY GIRL I AM SO SAD NOW.ANY WAY BRO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

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UkMan9

Wednesday, February 21, 2001 - 02:17 am
tribes fighting,
Fires igniting.
Children crying,
People dying.
Bombings of whole towns.
houses burning,
Hostages taken,
What kind of world are we makin'?

Everybody wanting to be on top,
Just where will it all stop?
Many of these people wishing they were dead,
And another civil War is rearing it's ugly head.

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Amazon XX

Wednesday, February 21, 2001 - 05:07 am
A war of brothers
A war of kin
Who forced you to slaughter
Your sister's child?

A cry for a land,
A cry for a people,
Who forced you sell
Your son's future?

Belated is the pain
Tears are not the rain
That will wash the sins of Cain.

Blame your brother
Blame your father
Blame the Judas
who sold the land of your mother!

Cry not for Somalia
For beloved it was not.
We lied.
We cheated.
We bled it to rot.

For when it was
We abandoned morality,
prostituted our souls,
for the chance to live in "Estaro"

We felt no pity,
For others bombarded in their cities!

We felt no mercy,
for the men jailed in "Godka" or "Labatan Jiro"

So to those weeping today,
I ask-
Do you not recognize
The fruits of your inaction?

This is the child,
You reared with your uncaring mind.

This is your Somalia,
The land of the heartless nomad.

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coczi

Wednesday, February 21, 2001 - 06:47 am
and may it burn forever for i care less

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cindy crawford

Wednesday, February 21, 2001 - 08:09 am
Amazon XX, I am impressed with your poetic tendencies.....u should cultivate it!!

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Cryingsis

Wednesday, February 21, 2001 - 03:23 pm
Harsh words & violent blows
Hidden secrets nobody knows
Eyes are open, hands are fisted
Deep inside I'm warped & twisted
So many tricks & so many lies
Too many whens & too many whys
Nobody's special, nobody's gifted
I'm just me, warped & twisted
Sleeping awake & choking on a dream
Listening loudly to a silent scream
Call my mind, the number's unlisted
Lost in someone so warped & twisted
On my knees, alive but dead
Look at the invisible blood I've bled
I'm not gone, my mind has drifted
Don't expect much, I'm warped & twisted
Burnt out, wasted, empty, & hollow
Today's just yesterday's tomorrow
The sun died out, the ashes sifted
I'm still here, warped & twisted

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Mother

Wednesday, February 21, 2001 - 05:12 pm
My little boy loved to play.
With hot wheels as a lad.
When he drove off, in his first real car.
My heart it was so sad.
His first real date, was to the prom.
My heart it filled with pride.
I couldn't help express emotion.
As he stood there by her side.
At his wedding, I did cry.
And let him know my feelings.
My little boys heart I held so long,
This lovely girl had stolen.
My first grandson was born today,
Without the presence of his dad.
For he was called away to war,
When he gets home, we will all be glad.
I heard the knock at the door,
Peeked out the window to see.
Before they spoke, I knew what they were here for.
My heart, my soul, just left me.
My thoughts go back into time,
When he was just a lad.
A dirty face with car in hand,
I wish I once again had.

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ReaLdeaL

Wednesday, February 21, 2001 - 06:34 pm
The Masses have No say !
Since the Warloard got his Way,
Violence seems to be the order of the day !

By road, by sea, by air they flee !
All wanna go to the land of the free !
Dont take me back,,,, they plead !

When will they see the light !
when will they stop to fight !!!!

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London sis

Thursday, February 22, 2001 - 07:15 am
Man You ppl are gooood.... Probs to all of you poets up in here (thats if they are your own poems). But Ya'll are making me cry... doesn't anybody have anything positive to write???

c ya

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UkMan9

Thursday, February 22, 2001 - 06:34 pm
London sis this is for u dear sis


I hope you woke up this morning with a big smile on your face . .
I hope the sun is shining just for you
and the birds are singing their very best songs ...
I hope your coffee is hot and tastes just right and the cats are purring contentedly,
and the mailman waves a cheery hello and there are no bills in the post ...
I hope that your day is filled with lovely surprises
and friends call you up just to say "Hi" ...
I hope you feel on top of the world with a spring in your step all day ...
I hope just everything goes your way ...
I hope everything is well with your world,
a place for everything and everything in it's place ...
I hope you can enjoy all you do and you are complimented on the way you look
and you can laugh and talk and share to your heart's content ...
I hope you have all you wish for yourself and those dear to you, and all your dreams come true ...
and at the end of the day I wish you a perfect moon shining just for you,
a snug and cosy bed with the softest of pillows
and I hope you sleep like a lamb with a smile on your face ...
I hope you have a perfect end to the perfect day
and I hope that every day is just as wonderful in it's own way

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SomLover

Thursday, February 22, 2001 - 11:14 pm
In rage i am o my lads and lasses
Lose not hope now or ever
All is well that was our land

What we lost we will build
What lay in ruins will be raised
Raise we will the pole and let the flag flatter

Rivers of love will flood where blood flowed
Love will free the souls and hate will fade
Live our life we will for the fatherland

Lugh and Lasanood the lowlands and the highlands
there will be love and no limits to our joy
Lula will ululate and Looyan leap in dance

Lose not hope lads and lasses
This land of Somalia is nay! not lost yet
Alive it is and looking for thee!

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UkMan9

Friday, February 23, 2001 - 07:12 am
Our Land's show

The flowers of the meadow present a colorful show
as they are caressed by the warm sun's glow

She offers her flowers as a treat for the deer
as a doe watches her fawn and keeps her near

Birds circling to land in the meadow below
looking for bugs, so their offspring will grow

Butterflies dancing together in mid-air,
one would think they are at a social affair

The bees scurry from flower to flower
gathering nectar they love to devour

The stream follows the meadows path,
a raccoon enjoys taking a bath

The frogs sing in unison nearby,
only stopping to catch a fly

The meadow is a wonderful place to go
to see Mother Nature put on her show

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Haaheey

Friday, February 23, 2001 - 07:51 am
Pleasant sitting in the shade.
Letting the day slip away.
Slight breeze keeps the heat at bay.

A small lizard on a rock,
looks at me through beady black-eyes,
and in a flash it’s gone.

A sparrow lands on a nearby branch,
it’s head bobbing up and down as it watches me.
I laugh out loud, and the bird takes flight.

Such beautiful country,
Air cleaner, sweeter the sky more blue.
Soon you find yourself escaping deeper,
Surrendering.

Shutting out the world.
Sitting there motionless.
As your spirit is set free.

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UkMan9

Friday, February 23, 2001 - 08:07 am
If only for a moment...

To see the our land come alive
with morning sun light, as it
gently pushes aside the dark
night sky...

To see a mother deer and her fawn
drinking from a reflecting
pool of water, the first
thing in the morning...

To see the smooth rocks formed
from a beautiful waterfall,
that flows endlessly down
a mountain side...

To see a rainbow that stopped
traffic, all gazing upon
an incredible dome, memorized
by uncountable colors...

To see the sky turn
to a deep red violet color,
as the sunset leaves it's
fiery trail behind...

To see so many stars across
a black velvet sky, that you
get dizzy from spinning about
to take them all in at once...

If only for a moment,
you could, see through my eyes...

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Anonymous

Friday, February 23, 2001 - 08:12 am
UKMAN9

DO U HAVE A LIFE DUDE???????????

ALL YOU DO IS COPY AND PAST...INTERESTING QUESTION TO PONDER.

VA GIRL

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Eq

Friday, February 23, 2001 - 08:19 am
Wisdom not hate
Love don't debate
Honor don't disrespect
Contact don't forget
Feelings keep deep
Mistakes don't repeat
Trust but know
Open your heart
Let the past go
Love from the soul
For all, even old
Never forget
Lessons are meant
Grow from your weakness
Find love, go seek it
Peace in the mind
An open heart for all kind

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UkMan9

Friday, February 23, 2001 - 10:16 am
Dadkaygoow dunidii dhamaanteed Dadkaygoow
Dowladaha haruumaray Dadkaygoow
Dayaxay u guureen Dadkaygoow
Qaarbaa Dull sahan saday Mars Dadkaygoow
Dahab iyo dheeman iyo Dadkaygoow
Dugsi aan qaboobin hawo aan Disease wadan
Duxa ila biya ah iyo wabiyaal Durduraya
Dalxiis ruuxii ku soo mara Qurux uu Dayoobi
Duulbaa ka door biday nabadii Dadkaygoow
Dagaal inay u jeestaan qabiil isu Dooxaan
Danta ay ka leeyihiin ilaa hadda igama Daadegin Dadkaygoow

kanna waa copy and paste huh anonymous VA girl

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UkMan9

Friday, February 23, 2001 - 11:44 am
Light Up Our Land With Love


As the world turns around in space,
And time moves on in distance to place.
Let the sun warms the hearts of all who care,
And make this land one of such love to share.
Beam down on this earth with a magical glow,
For hearts across tribes to begin to show.
Light up the land with love so true,
Let it be felt deep inside each of you.
Spread a smile and let others clearly see,
What can happen if we all try to let it be.
As the world spins and days turn to night,
Let the glow of the moon increase loves light.
Down into hearts from near and so far away,
Bring peace around the Land forever to stay
And pray for Allah to make it so Amiin

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sheikh abdi sheelaweyne

Friday, February 23, 2001 - 07:17 pm
well people specially ukman, iam very gratefull , that our beloved nation has people like you , and others in this unique world. the peoms that you , and others wrote are very touching regardless wether you copied or not. i would appreciate if you leave an email , that i can contact you. remember iam a somali man .i just want to congratulate you personally, and tell you how much i enjoyed your peoms. this is perfect. i would like to get the emails of all the peots please , just make emails brothers and sisters ,so that we can't contact you . as a zealous somali nationalist what can i say. i wish i had the words to describe my take of the homeland , somalia . peace and love to all my people. may allah bless your souls bros and sis.

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Haaheey

Saturday, February 24, 2001 - 06:27 am
flying amidst the winter storm
threading the strong northward wind
pushed back but keep on going
flew with current then southward again

each day they flew in pairs
but today his mate is nowhere
what happened, I wonder
nobody knows, only them can answer

a day of reckoning brave mallard
you flew alone before, you know
go to new places where no one go
destiny is waiting, fate never forsaken you

mallard my friend, keep on flying
destination is in sight, no quitting
out there lady mallard is waiting
love full of passion and understanding

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UkMan9

Saturday, February 24, 2001 - 07:24 am
I do not know what to say Sheikh abdi rather than thank U. although ur name is weird loooool he he he kaftan click on my nick if U want to see my e-mail bro

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Sadperson

Saturday, February 24, 2001 - 10:50 am
Whispers upon the midnight air
Soft breezes speak of yesteryear
Willows kissing tears streaming
Memories flood banks of despair

Reflections of anguished control
Soul torn searches peaces comfort
Nomadic ripples upon sorrows tide
Aimless wandering waves of empty

Shattered dreams of hollowed heart
Screams silently echo in halls of mind
Shrieking fear grips imminent thought
Hope shouts terrified on clouded vision

Wretched emotions in solitudes darkness
Terrains colorless edge teeters on cliff
Waning defeated spirit vanishing dives in
Black abyss in the land of broken dreams

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UkMan9

Saturday, February 24, 2001 - 11:06 am
Raining season how beautiful is our land

A ribbon of crystal winds peacefully downstream.
Clover covers the ground, in a velvet carpet of green.

Birds soar high above, spreading their wings.
Trees sway with graceful motion, as the wind sings.

Butterflies flutter, first here, then there,
playing a childlike game of chase through the air.

Flowers face upward to smile at the rising sun.
The blue sky forms a canopy, a new day has begun.

Slowly the sun moves in search of the horizon,
and as the two meet, the darkness widens.

Night arrives, the crystal ribbon now quicksilver.
The trees are still as the wind becomes a whisper.

The carpet of clover glistens with dew.
The flowers rest, for tomorrow they renew.

The birds return to the safety of their nest,
as a new day begins in a land farther west.

Fireflies appear sprinkling glitter everywhere.
A surreal glow reflects from the mist in the air.

Stars fill the sky, suspended in space.
Moonlight shadows in patterns of midnight lace.

In this place of untold beauty,
travelers visit yet remain unseen,
for it is the land of Somalia,
where each traveler comes to dream.

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Haaheey

Saturday, February 24, 2001 - 11:26 am
I am torn between forces.
Both against me.
What can I do?
I am faced with a lose/lose situation.
To this there is no right answer, both are wrong.
I feel terrible for choosing.
I am faced with an unanswerable question.
Who can answer it?
Is there a right or wrong?
Torn between friends.
Both I love and care about, forcing me to choose sides.
I can’t choose.
But if I don’t, I loose them both.
Why must you put me in this deadlock?
A war is being fought, and I’m in the middle.
Both sides getting equipped for battle, readying their men.
Sharpening their swords, bringing their horses.
Readying their bows, for the battle comes at dawn.
Many will die.
Many will be wounded.
None will be taken prisoner.
Neither will surrender.
All I want is to stop this madness beforehand.
I wish I could help,
But I am so inadequate.
I must be strong.
I must help.
If you care anything about me please stop this foolish fighting.
I will not choose sides.
I will not favor one over the other.
I will not give in to your pleas.
I love you both, and you can’t change that.
Stop this insane civil war, and go back to being friends.
I would do anything to restore this.
I wish you would heed my words and stop.
Nothing can come between us, certainly not your foolish fights.
Fighting for nothing, why does it continue?
No answer will I accept.

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sheikh cabdi sheelaweyne

Saturday, February 24, 2001 - 03:44 pm
hey ukman9 bro , when i clicked your nickname nothing came up , so please leave a legit email, so you could be contacted , and post these poems, on the general discusion to share them with every one. iam interested in all the peots here, i wish though i know which ones are actual peots. peace and love people. this is something i have become addicted to when iam in my boring job. peace and love people. sheikh abdi sheelaweyne is my actual nickname by the way bro

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UkMan9

Saturday, February 24, 2001 - 04:31 pm
sheikh ok bro
naadiif@yahoo.co.uk

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ReaLdeaL

Saturday, February 24, 2001 - 04:33 pm
This is the first poem I wrote on Somalia and I want to share it with you guys again.

I dedicate this Poem to the children of Somalia,,,,

I try to Sleep
but the pain is too deep,

How can they dare
to say they dont Care,

The Warload knows No bound
All he wants is a Crown,

Violence is in the Air
Bullets are Everywhere,

They Kill them with Hunger
So that they can Conquer,

When Peace becomes a Stranger
we all are in danger,

Cant they see War is the Enemy
Violence is not the Remedy,

Give Peace a Chance
Let the Children dance,

Lets make a deal
So we can begin to heal,

If Allah they fear
the end is Near,

What will they say
come judgement day,

For what Crime
did they the children die,

I cry for thee
children of Somalia.

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UkMan9

Sunday, February 25, 2001 - 05:05 am
VA GIRL my dear sis... do you have to question where the poem came from, if we copy and paste or not..

Do you feel what the poem has revealed
Do you see what my hearts have felt
does it have to be like so and so
Then why question, if it made your heart melt

If words have touched,in some sort of way
and even made you want to cry
some gave you a sense of what war is all about

Oh VA GIRL be wise and feel the pain

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UkMan9

Sunday, February 25, 2001 - 11:28 am
As frighten as a child in a dark room
My life is that child
My world is the room
A constant torment that derives from
A simple fact
Pain and Confusion run fast and rapid to my life like blood flows in a vein

Decrepit is the tired reality that not one soul knows that which is the mind known as me.
A life of illusion, that’s the role I feel I lead,
Secretly holding back my thoughts, feelings, for every one things insane thoughts,
It is only the mad that says them out aloud.


Some days I really wonder where I am,
I live with all my thoughts, it’s the third stage that contempt's me
I want to wake up where the light is, where there is no one call's me names
Where things are better than the cold, hardened, dark, destructive, infestation, apocalyptic place.

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Amazon XX

Monday, February 26, 2001 - 03:41 am
So now that you eloquently,
established your pain.

Will you continue to wail
Crying your tears to fill a pail.

For Somalia, you can do you part,
By helping the people in these parts!

The homeland has perished
But living still are the people you so cherish.

So.....walaalkiis- tir ilintaada,
and dadkaaga caawin!

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UkMan9

Saturday, March 03, 2001 - 11:43 am
Will this break tomorrow
Break me from this drought
Yes,hot ,dry and lonely
With nothing to write about

The words I weave today
Will they stay woven tomorrow
Who will be tempted to join me
Put an end to all this sorrow

Where did you all gain wings
How come I see those fly
I seem to fall upon my face
However hard that I try

I really need to go there
Embrace those untold destinies
Please bring me a pair of wings
Then lift me from my knees

If I could find the nerve
On a calm and distant sky
Just needing a help to do this
Then I’m sure that I would fly

Today as I look around me
I see those who pass me by
Why can’t we all build wings
To help each other fly

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UkMan9

Saturday, March 03, 2001 - 11:54 am
Harmony is possible

Not to give anyone power
It would only weaken me
So its share and share alike
Give and take comes equally

Important are these journeys
Don't leave anyone feeling weak
Guide each in a special way
With the warmth on which you speak

Harmony is always possible
Join together and meet half way
Change the bitter into the sweet
Always know the words to say

All can make the same mistakes
Tomorrow we each can do better
Each person can have the power
To be a giver not always a getter

Harmony means in agreement
To be there for you,if your there for me
You have opinions and so have I
But at times we don't always agree

We all enjoy times of receiving love
So we give more back in return
Never impose dark moods on others
In each day its lessons we learn

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UkMan9

Monday, March 05, 2001 - 03:32 pm
as I lay here dieing,
my face hid in the ground,
so no one see's me crying,
for heaven I am bound.
mama, I am just a boy,
fighting in a tribe war,
playing with guns,no more toys,
what's all this bloodshed for?
mama I am so scared,
of what may become of me,
I feel as if my peaple declared,
a war on only me.
I told you that I'd be ok,
but now I know I lied,
by the time you've read this poem,
you know that I have died.
now the blood is flooding out,
from the bullet wound,
I'm going to die without a doubt,
I wish I were at home.
give everyone I know my love,
soon i'll be deceist.
now..I'm going up above,
out of tribe war and into peace.

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UkMan9

Monday, March 05, 2001 - 04:48 pm
A march of a hundred people
a street of unwanted territory
Which victim shall fall next?
Will someone be there to help?
Our toleration is beginning to split
We've opened ourselves at last
These people know not
why they're fighting
or whom
they're fighting for
but one thing is clear
The victims are not to blame

Can these people look through the eyes of another?
What is tribe anyway?
Running from society is one way to tribe
But running towards it is a challenge
What can you do in a country like this?
Or am I being rhetorical?

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sheikh cabdi sheelaweyne

Tuesday, March 06, 2001 - 04:16 pm
ukman bro where is your poem for the ciid . if you have any share with us. and also post them on the general discusion please. eid mubarak to you and to all sistaz around the globe peace n love

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A Sister

Wednesday, March 07, 2001 - 05:41 am
All I want is gone now
All I needed is just a dream
Tears I put before me
On a road reflecting pain

All alone I walk now
To the beat of a broken heart
Silent steps
I hear so loudly
And your pain
I have to share

Holding you with such devotion
Never wanting to let go
Honoring your wishes
I know it’s time to go

Love has turned to hate now
And you cannot bear to hear Somali name
All I wanted is gone now
Smoke lost in the winds of change
While I put a tear inside my heart
For it has a reflection of my land
locked forever in sorrow's heart

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UkMan9

Monday, March 12, 2001 - 10:54 am
Frustrating, hate, anger.
My heart over flowing with pain and confusion.
Wanting a shoulder to cry on,
A hand to hold.
Lost in a deep dark forest, raging fires burning inside,
Speechless words of fear.
An unknowing direction, an unending road of pain.
The first civil war almost dead,
Another is growing.
Will I survive.

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UkMan9

Monday, March 12, 2001 - 11:03 am
Sweet, sweet Child of war
Tell me, my little one, what was it you saw
You schoolmates all shot by their own protector
Tell me how and whisper quite softly
How you survived , yet mum and dad died
Tell how the me said the good people winning
Whom can you tell are the good or the Bad
Sweet, sweet child of war
Why do you not cry
The tears you had all dried up and gone
Little one I feel your pain
I wish I could promise you 'Never Again'
Yet our great leaders say
Some have to die for our tribe
Sweet child of War , no all men don't lie
They just are mistaken
Killing seems to be their only way
Sweet Child I know
It's a hide and seek
Sweet child of war I hold you so tightly
As you try to hold on to your life
And you die so lightly

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Amaal

Monday, March 12, 2001 - 03:52 pm
* STOP*


Stop the hate for I'm
tired and weak, because
I'd rather die than stay
and see. The hatred that we
have because of greed
love is all that we will
ever need.


Stop the hate for I'm
tired and weak,
because I'd rather
be hanged than stay and believe.
That this is just
a place of disgust and
grief which is supposed
to be a paradise for me.


I was happy but now I
see. What a mistake this has
been. Hatred makes men
fight and bleed and greed is their
greatest sin.


Stop the hate for
I'm tired and weak
peace is what we will
always need for we are lost
in hatred's mist and
in it we will slowly
ceased to exist.

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muslim

Thursday, March 22, 2001 - 03:30 am
I do not know much about poems - in fact I can hardly put together a few poetic lines to produce a meaningful verse - but, nonetherless, I do appreciate their importance in stirring emotions and thus transforming lives both at the personal level as well as communal.Throughout history poeple have derived inspiration from poems.Its for this reason that I thank all the contributors who were kind enough to share with us their thoughts and feelings regardless of wether it was original or not.

The question that I pose to you readers is can poems alone change a whole nation which has fallen on hard times.Did we ever ask ourselves "where has it gone wrong?". Everything is governed by the Universal Law of Cause And Effect - i.e nothing ever happens by chance according to Islamic belief . I suggest that we take one long hard look in the mirror and address that question. Some of u may well be saying already that the root cause of all our problems is tribalism; others would say that there was no true democracy and so on and so forth.

Yes some of these factors did contibute towards our social disintegration but were they the fundamental ones. You see when a disaster happens poeple ask " how did it happen" - in the wake of a devatstating earthquake, for intance, its common to hear poeple blaming their buildings saying they were not stong enough to withstand the tremor. If only we had stronger buildings.....
Others would say its the geographical locations of this town or city - if only our town was not built on the edges of these tectonic plates { regions where earthquake is more likely to occur}....

Again are these the fundamental factors or merely superficial. I think we are merely sratching the surface to supposse that this town's ruin was entirely due to its weak buildings and location. Yes these were contributing factors but they were not the ultimate ones. In Islam we are taught that this disaster is a means of checking man's transsgression and reminding him of Allah's power . Its awake up call for mankind to change their erring ways and thus mend their lives.

What's has befallen my lot is a catastrophe of unimaginable propotions.The rise and fall of any Muslim person and nation depends on the Holy Quran (and I have practically experienced that).The muslim person has to understand that he's blessed with Islam and that he's chosen by God as such. Open your heart to Islam and be model for the rest of humanity so that u gain recognition and honour from muslims and non-muslim alike or else you would always be consingned to a life of misery and humiliation. That's God's punishment - u only have to look the world's map and notice that most of the trouble spots are in muslim lands.Where do u see starvation, war , misery and senseless killings and other horrors ? only in muslim lands. Its not tribalism (though a contributing factor) or lack of democracy etc etc that is our root cause of our pitiful state.Its our gross negligence of Islam and now we are paying the ultimate price. There is no solution without Islam and no one in his right sense would dispute that fact. Poems alone do not change anything - they are merely EMPTY SLOGANS!!!

Like-minded persons welcome to contact me at bantu_g@hotmail.com but I can't guarantee that I would respond to every email because of my busy schedule.

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Ayanah hassan

Sunday, March 25, 2001 - 07:32 pm
how can put this ,WE HAVE MADE A BREAK THROUGH SO TO ALL YOU POETS AND ALL WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR THE FUTURE OUR PEOPLE WERE NARROW MINDED TO DISTROY A COUNTRY LIKE SOMALIA.I FIFTEEN AND I WAS A LITTLE KID WHEN WE LEFT SO I REALLY DON'T KNOW MUCH ABOUT IT .SO HERE IS A QUESTION WHY DID WE FIGHT WAS IT POLITICALLY AND WHY DIDN'T THEY THINK OF DEMOCRACY-THAT IS FAIRNESS AND ELECTION NOT GETTING INTO PARLIMENT BY FORCE SEEEMS LIKE A WHOLE LOT OF STUPIDITY SO DON'T WORRY WE ARE THE ONES TO MAKE A CHANGE

"CHANGE STARTS WHEN SOMEONE SEES THE NEXT STEP" AND THATS WHAT WE ARE ALL EXPERIENCING AND IT'S OUR DUTIES TO SOMALI THE WAY IT WAS.


PEACE ALL
AND PEACE TO OUR COUNTRY.

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