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1londoner poem

Posted: Sat Sep 24, 2011 12:49 am
by SultanOrder
Landhan wrote:Hadaa hada la eego
Wadada aad hada mariso
Maad is leedahay wey ku ficantahay?
Mise meel iska qurun bey tahay?

Dad fic ficaan waad weeyaysa
Kuwi xunxun waad la ciyaareysa
Raves iyo baadhi baad qabneysa
Waad isla qaawineysa
Cunta xaaran baad cuneysa
Khamri laakiin waad diideysa
‘Waa xaaran’ baad oreyneysa
Guriga late baad soo galeysa
Hoyo miyaad dhageysaneysa?
May dheh, ileen Aabona waad la ceytameysa

Labadaba wey ku sanifiyaan
Guriga bey kaa tuureyaan
Waxaad la saxaneysa saxiibta Ayaan
Ti iska waalwaalan
Drugs iyo baaleeyo bey kugu shubeysa
Adigana maad diideysa?

Sarirta baad la fadhida
Yadana rollkii bey ku haysa
Adigana cod baad maqleysa
Cid ba kula hadleeya

Qof subconscious leydhaaho

Muxu leeyahey talow?

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Part 2 Coming Soon :mrgreen:
where is part 2? I thought yours was the realist and wasn't based on some illusion of thinking they are poets. Your spoke of real day to day issues that are confronted by somali youngsters everyday trying to reconcile they're identies here in the west. Your easy to understand somali carries the deep message behind for all of us to understand. hurry up and write part two. :up:

Re: 1londoner poem

Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2011 9:49 am
by SultanOrder
:lol: 1londoner u have to shed this die hard footie lover image ppl are imposing on u, they cant register a topic that involves you and other topics :lol: smh

Re: 1londoner poem

Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2011 10:46 am
by 1_londoner
Looooooooooooooooooooool. Dude, how did you find this? Lol, I dont even remember writing it..damn how wack was my af somali back then lool. :lol:

Thanks you for the compliments man... :mrgreen: :rose:

Dont worry about the lack of replies mate, my poems back in the days wernt shown much appreciation, I guess its still the same right about now lol.

I will write Part 2, just for you. ;)

Re: 1londoner poem

Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2011 10:51 am
by Beans
I am bookmarking this.Not only because it is a masterpiece,but it will make me feel much better every time i feel bad abt ma written Somali :D :up:

Re: 1londoner poem

Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2011 11:26 am
by SultanOrder
Londoner I remember the other poems you wrote back in 2008 or something where you combined english and somali, had me in stitches, and that one actually rhymed. Someone hashed up and old topic and I saw it. :mrgreen:

Beans I thought her somali wasn't so bad :lol: