To Dun.. Straight off the T-O-P

Ghetto_Poetress · Post by **Ghetto_Poetress** » Sun Feb 26, 2006 9:06 am

I'm standing on your great shoulders...
I can touch the brightest star...I'm focused
Gripping on the canvas, and relish in the passing...
Of your wittyness, as I glance in your direction again....
I'm no longer silent, I'm determined to win your affection...
Without words my eyes speak to get your attention..
I feel you watching, yet so brilliant and charming...
You are like a cool breeze that's so inviting...
The wind sounds like its calling your name out...D-U-N Laughing

Calming like leaving the door open in the country...
No need to turn on the radio, we create our own music....
I'm confessing that you are, more than just words to me, BOY YOUR SOO HANDSOME... Smile

Or a screen name, chosen to represent you in cyber-space...
You are tempting me to dance in your ray of light...

Soooooo Where's my pink i-pod Dun Smile

Dun · Post by **Dun** » Sun Feb 26, 2006 9:08 am

I don't see Handsome.

Sorry, no Ipod.

Can't edit either!

Ghetto_Poetress · Post by **Ghetto_Poetress** » Sun Feb 26, 2006 9:10 am

Lool about no handsome.. your looks don't matter

it's alright to be ugly Smile

Dun · Post by **Dun** » Sun Feb 26, 2006 9:12 am

But I'm not, so I want that to be known. Smile

Very good poem, if the word Handsome was involved it would of been great.

Ghetto_Poetress · Post by **Ghetto_Poetress** » Sun Feb 26, 2006 9:15 am

Well re-read then

Dun · Post by **Dun** » Sun Feb 26, 2006 9:17 am

Aight, pink(chavtastic colour) Ipod on the way to you.

You're gonna be charged posting and packaging though.

Ghetto_Poetress · Post by **Ghetto_Poetress** » Sun Feb 26, 2006 4:19 pm

I don't think soo

You know your ganna pay for it Smile