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I believe while he made across his message, the art is poorly well established. Look the 3 men with red arrow. Where are they looking. They are looking to the walls. That is not a good impression in art class. If he was my student; I give him letter F on that picture. how is that?
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I know you don't look or think it is important mistake but in art class it is a big mistake. When it comes to Saciid Afisoone. You need to sell your skills. how is that?
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