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Wax Wada Yar!!!

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Beri aan yaraan jiray,
Oo iskuul yar lay qoray,
Oo inan yar lay baray,
Oo waraaq yar na u qoray,
Oo boos yarna u dhigay
Oo jawaab yar aan helay,
Show jacayl yar baa i galay,
Intaan shaqo yar raadsaday,
Oo lacag yar soo helay,
Oo an habaryarna u tagay,
Show Hagbad yar bay i gashay
Intaan suit yar iibsaday,
Oo tie yar lay xidhay,
Tima jare yarna u tagay,
Oo taaloo yar lay jaray,
Oo aan oday yar sii waday,
Oo wadaad yar loo wacay,
Yartii meher yar lagu xidhay,
Koofeer yar loowaday,
Oo toob yar loo xidhay,
Oo aroos yar lay dhigay,
Ana keeg yar aan jaray,
Oo hees yar lay tumay
Sawtii wiil yar lay dhalay.. :lol:
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Re: Wax Wada Yar!!!

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Here is how Walweyns would write this poam, I made minor adjustments, I am not a poet, but the rhyming is little off, maybe my walaweyn version is beter.

Beri aan yaraan jiray,
Oo iskuul yar aan galay, edited
Oo inan yar aan bartay, edited
Oo waraaq yar na u qoray,
Oo kursi yarna u dhigay edited
Oo jawaab yar aan helay,
Oo jacayl yar i galay, Removed Show, and baa
Intaan shaqo yar soo helay, replaced raadsaday with soo helay
Oo lacag yar soo helay,
Oo an habaryarna u tagay,
Oo Hagbad yar i gashay Edited
Intaan suit yar soo gatay, Edited
Oo tie yar lay xidhay,
Tima jare yarna u tagay,
Oo taaloo yar lay jaray, wth is taaloo
Oo aan oday yar sii waday,
Oo wadaad yar loo wacay,
Yartii meher yar lagu xidhay,
Oo yarad yar aan dhiibay
burikiyeer yar loowaday, edited, cuz I don't know what koofeer is :lol:
Oo canbuur yar loo xidhay, edited
Oo aroos yar lay dhigay,
Ana keeg yar aan jaray,
Oo hees yar lay tumay
Oo filin yar ley dhigay added this line
Oo nuuris yarna ley tusay added this line
Oo hurdo yarna ku xijiyay added this line
Sawtii wiil yar lay dhalay
Oo farxad yar ii timid added this line

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Re: Wax Wada Yar!!!

Post by KingWaslawi »

DafIyoMiriq wrote:Here is how Walweyns would write this poam, I made minor adjustments, I am not a poet, but the rhyming is little off, maybe my walaweyn version is beter.

Beri aan yaraan jiray,
Oo iskuul yar aan galay, edited
Oo inan yar aan bartay, edited
Oo waraaq yar na u qoray,
Oo kursi yarna u dhigay edited
Oo jawaab yar aan helay,
Oo jacayl yar i galay, Removed Show, and baa
Intaan shaqo yar soo helay, replaced raadsaday with soo helay
Oo lacag yar soo helay, These two red sentences with underline don't go together sxb.
Oo an habaryarna u tagay,
Oo Hagbad yar i gashay Edited
Intaan suit yar soo gatay, Edited
Oo tie yar lay xidhay,
Tima jare yarna u tagay,
Oo taaloo yar lay jaray, wth is taaloo
Oo aan oday yar sii waday,
Oo wadaad yar loo wacay,
Yartii meher yar lagu xidhay,
Oo yarad yar aan dhiibay
burikiyeer yar loowaday, edited, cuz I don't know what koofeer is :lol:
Oo canbuur yar loo xidhay, edited
Oo aroos yar lay dhigay,
Ana keeg yar aan jaray,
Oo hees yar lay tumay
Oo filin yar ley dhigay added this line
Oo nuuris yarna ley tusay added this line
Oo hurdo yarna ku xijiyay added this line
Sawtii wiil yar lay dhalay
Oo farxad yar ii timid added this line

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Inaar meeshii waad kharibtay, allaa yahdiik, waa maxay waxan aad noosoo baqdhooshtay! :oops:
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