Re: The Unholy Alliance
Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 1:22 pm
Jamac_Yare wrote:anoo gabad xoogiya miya filinka sequelka ?AbdiWahab252 wrote:Jamac_Yare wrote:basra you got competition
jamac,
I will include you in the sequel.
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Re: The Unholy Alliance
Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 1:03 pm
Abdi .. 
I thought it descriptions and story telling was good, however u need to improve in arranging your sentences and also improve the skills of creating images into your readers mind when they read your sentences.
PS: I dont like the fact that u have involved Twisted logic into your stories!
I thought it descriptions and story telling was good, however u need to improve in arranging your sentences and also improve the skills of creating images into your readers mind when they read your sentences.
PS: I dont like the fact that u have involved Twisted logic into your stories!