SNET STORY: The Last Battle, Struggle for SNET

[AbdiWahab252]

[quote="Nabeela"][quote="Basra-"] I can just picture you also messenging your Ugandan lover [/quote]

Looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool.

WTF. This made ZERO sense. [/quote]

I concur Nabz

[Basra-]

Nab -- dont u dare pretend u dont know loooool



'Messanging' as in Messenger? IM? Instant Messenger ??

[AbdiWahab252]

Basra just wants to be included in the story.

What role should she have ?

The Night Walker at the Buuryoqab Army Base.

The Garoob with the 5 kids from 5 different men.

The Khat seller & Bordello Owner ?

Plz let me know.

[Basra-]

Abdi


The ingredients of great writings is simple.The opening paragraph has to be absolutely interesting & captivating. The story has to have substance & a plot. To be funny always helps as well--- audiences always love to laugh when reading interesting stuff. Your language has to be inviting & very impeccable.Your dialogue skills are better but not good or excellent.Keep it up! Give me a reason to read other than a bribery to include me in the story. Make the story compelling & fascinating.

[michael_ital]

I agree My Dear Basra, he should have had you and I indulging in a hot, steamy, intense, clandestine sweat-soaked illicit affair.

[Cawar]

Basra

Do I sense some jealousy here?? Dont be..

YOu two are both good writers..with different styles..he appeals to the common folks, the less aristocratic group, the averag joe lets just say that...
You on the other hand target different readers/audiences...and you know those kind of readers are scarsity in Snet..

Ooh and more thing...He is a promising junior writer with some potential, you are an established one.



Que l'en continue!!!

[Basra-]

Mikey@looooooooooooooool

U & sex in your mind! It will never happen. I have to be experienced with the kind of perverted sex u are looking for, all i know is--sensual,poetically clandestined sex.

Cawar??? Wow-- thanks for that touching compliment.So Abdi appeals to the average joes?? Wow--what a compliment.

[michael_ital]

No Darling Basra, i'm no freek. I'm just passionate. I promise you'll leave feeling fulfilled.

[Basra-]

'He is a promising junior writer with some potential, you are an established one. '


Wow--Cawar--- thats very sweet of you! You know if i read these kinds of reviews i would have been 'inspired' to write more.




Mikey--sure sure--call it passion--i call it 'Got freak on'?

[michael_ital]

Admit it my dear. You ARE intrigued. You just have the fear that you'll grow to love it, and thus become a "freek" as well.

[AbdiWahab252]

Watches Cawar & Mickey appeal to Basra's greatest flaw, vanity.

Predicts a menage a trois coming soon.

[Basra-]

[quote="AbdiWahab252"]Watches Cawar & Mickey appeal to Basra's greatest flaw, vanity.

Predicts a menage a trois coming soon.[/quote]


There u go--be this hilarious Abdi!

[gurey25]

@Hiiraale move.

aptly named for an ordered retreat.
Hiiraale does a good job of it, i must admit.

[AbdiWahab252]

Gurey, especially when he retreats on foot to his base 200 kilometers away

[gurey25]

200Km !!
pretty fit for an old man isnt he.

but then again having a bunch of born again muslim/mooryaan on your ass will make you do wonders