The_Emperior5 wrote:ismacil mire waxa ka khatarsana Cali dhuux adan gorayo dhowr gabay midda u xita xawayaanka laga la hadlayo lama barbar ag dhigi karo cali dhuux adan oo kale oo xarafyada nooc kasta ka gabyay
Nimanyahow awow iyo awow iyo abkaan sheegto
Iyo aniga abidkay ma arag iibsi lacageede
Adduun buu lahaan jirey raaggaan ka isirraa waaye
Ololahaan wax kaga qaybsan jirey ululuf duullaane
Mar uun baan amaamuday waxaan aabahay faline
Afar waxaan u dhaxay tuuladii awrta loo raraye
Albaabkii Burcaan tegey anoo aaladii sida e
Amminkiiba lay yimid sidii eegta lay yahaye
Ooggii horey nagu kaceen adhi dillaalkiiye
Dad iimaanka laga qaaday baa noo aloogsadaye
Amakaagay goortay wankii adhaxda tuujeene
Intaa weeye iyo ma'ahadii la is ilaaqaayey
Asaraartankii baa qalbiga aad wax ii dhimaye
Afka reer magaaluhu yaqaan waan ka oodnahaye
Ii-maroojihii bay khatalay kii aan aaminaye
Afar bawlad laga gooyey bay igu aluubeene
Anigoo arkaayaa gacmaha laygu iibsadaye
Kuwo boqonta ood laga sudhay ila ahaayeene
Usha jeedal iyo suufaf bay igu illaaweene
Ashcaartaba rag baa iga badshee idinku weydiiya
gabaygan oo kalle dhag la qabta ma leh xaraf kasta way is dhex yaacaysa i can hardly call this a gabay more jacbur yar
sxb im really too concerned with which was greater cali aadan or ismaaciil mire. it doesnt really make a lot of difference to me since between they are top 2 greatest poets ever. anyhow no one in there right mind could ever call ismaaciil mire's poems jacbur. his poems are work of literature oo waliba hal abuur iyo murtiba ka dhameysa tiran.
for example look at this poem, which probably the most famous somali poem. gabaygani waa dhexlay maahmaaha soomaalida tan manta ugu murtida iyo aqoonta weyn.do think the likes of cali habiil iyo carabey were capable of producing work like this.
Kulligood adoomaha rabboow qaybsha kibistiiye
Qof kastoo kabtiya ama kalaha ama kur dheer fuula
Bad kalluun ku jirra kollay ku tahay amase koob shaah ah
Ninba kadabkii loo qoray Ilaah wuu la kulansiine
Inaan ruuxna soo korodhsanayn kaa ha la ogaado
Ninkase koob nimca ah fuuqsadee kadin irmaan maala
In karuurka uu qubo horay kaafka ugu tiille
Killigiiba Reer-Hagar anaa kiin ah baa rogaye
Kamma Sugulle maankii sidii kuray carruureede
Kas xumaa hoddaye naagta way kala fogaayeene
Ragow kibirka waa lagu kufaa kaa ha la ogaado
Lixda koos ee Reer Cali-gariye kaw iskaga siiyey
Kasi waaye wuxu waa qabaal waadna kabataane
Ragow kibirka waa lagu kufaa kaa ha la ogaado
Kaysaha adduun Ina Amaan kuma qarraacnayne
Ragbaa keeno gali buu is yidhi waad u koraysaaye
Misna kama fileyn mana hadayn kii Israa'ilaye
Ragow kibirka waa lagu kufaa kaa ha la ogaado
Af xakame karkabadii u ay iyo kulaylkiiye
Ka dambee Calluu yidhi intuu Kaaha guursadaye
Isna kaal u tumay weyn intuu kariyey waabeeye
Ragow kibirka waa lagu kufaa kaa ha la ogaado
Kalmadduu lahaa Ina Galaydh kohay gadaashiiye
Kaarkuba ma joogeen hadduu keeno tuluddiiye
Baallacad kalyaha kuma jareen kii uu quudhsadaye
Ragow kibirka waa lagu kufaa kaa ha la ogaado
Raguu muxumud waal raray haduu saanta uga kaadsho
Kulcad uma ay dileen oo hadana koor magaliyeene
Ragow kibirka waa lagu kufaa kaa ha la ogaado
Cartan dhuurta kooraha markuu kor ugu laalaayey
Garaad Faarax dhay iyo karuur kala macaanaaye
Misna kala khadhaadhaa dhunkaal kulankii goobeede
Ragow kibirka waa lagu kufaa kaa ha la ogaado
Adaa dunida kaligaa leh buu Koofil eersadaye
Kashiisaba ma galin wiilalbaa keebka kuu qabane
Ragow kibirka waa lagu kufaa kaa ha la ogaado
Kaakici wadaadkii dagaal laguna kaalmeeye
Kumanyaal laguug duub cad buu keenay Beerdhiga e
Waxse kadabkii go'ay maalintuu kaday raggiisiiye
Kabaalkiisii baa jabay markuu kariyey Reer Kheyre
Ragow kibirka waa lagu kufaa kaa ha la ogaado
Mid kuwaa ka dhigan baan arkoon kibis u laabneyne
Inta uu kashbacay oo kibroo kamman wan weyn yeeshay
Yuu niman karaamiyo colba leh kiish ka buuxsadaye
Kashib dhaha Adoomahoow naftii kii ladnaa gadaye
this poem is ultimate in terms of hal abuur and murti.
this second poems is also un matched interms of hal abuur and structure
Annagoo Taleex naal jahaad taladi soo qaadnay,
Toddobaatan boqol oo Darwiish togatay neef doorka,
Sayidkeennu tii uu na yidhi Torog ku heensaynnay.
Wareegada waxay uga tawalin yaan wax kaa tegine,
Sibraar caana geel loo tabcaday Talax ku sii maallay,
Misna tawlka qaalmaha tanniyo tulud u soo saarray.
Ilaahay ha tabantaabiyee noogu tacab khayrka,
Shakadaha intuu noo tamilay tiisa nagu waani,
Tiirkii Rasuulkiyo sharciga toog ku wada fuullay.
Galabtaa taxaabiyo kadlaba toobiyaha qaadnay,
Habeenkii fardaha waw tudhnaye taag ku sii mirannay,
Tun biciida lagu qoofalyoo xamashka loo taabay.
Goortii ay Talaaduhu dhaceen talalayoo reemay,
Tixda gabay kolkii aan akhriyey toose niman jiifay,
Tiraabkaygu meeshu ka baxay la isku soo tuumi.
Salaaddii markii loo tukaday yaari kaga taagnay,
Togga Ulasameed dooyadii horay u tuuryaynnay,
Intay Timacad noo soo arkeen marada noo taage.
Sengeyaal tabaadihiyo gool weerarka u tooxnay,
Sidii Teyse rooboo onkoday tiririgtii yeedhay,
Teeriyo Berbera qayladii tahan la waydaaray.
Tiiraanyo ololkii dhulkii taani naga qaaday,
Tafwareemanmaynine intaan tubay ku aanshaaday,
Taambuuglayaaliyo kuway tebaysey soo gaare,
Annaguna dagaal kama tagnee tiimbad ugu rooray.
Tala xumada awrtuu xidhay baqi tarraarsiinnay,
Girligaanku meeshu turqaday lagu tu'sii geela,
Tirsanmaynin uunkii tirmiyo Tulushle Iiddoore,
Turjubaannadii daba socdiyo Koofi lagu toogay.
Maadhiin turaabtaa ka badan tuurta kaga qaadnay,
Gaaladu waxay tacab lahayd taabnay subaxaaba,
Tukihii intaan niman u wadhay tobanle soo qaatay.
Galabtaa carraabada ku timid Turugga Buuhoodle,
Gebagebo u tooxnoo Kufriga Maarre kaga teednay,
Habeenkaa ninkii tabar badnaa tarantarree gaadhka,
Habeen kalena Taxaasheey Nugaal Godan u tuuryaynnay,
Habeen kalena Tuuraha Cadduur toolin kaga maallay,
Habeen kalena tagaabeeye iyo tu'innay Hayllaawe,
Habeen kale Dariiqada tubnoo toosan lagu qaybsay.
Toban gool tabaadiga noqdiyo toban unuun-gooyo,
Iyo toban tiftii hore rimayoo taawi lagu qooqshey,
Iyo toban abeer tawl ahoo tikhilka qaalmooda,
Iyo Toban irmaanoo aniga la igu taageeray,
Iyo taan eryoon jirey kolkay toban tahaan joogto,
Tookh laguma faaniyo afaan taabbud noqonayne,
Intaa Xarunta soo tubay xaqaa lagu tanaadaaye.
Warka Tuurre waa laga hayaa taniyo Iimeeye,
Waa Xamar tarraaroo haddana taab ku sii daraye,
Taltallaabsigiisiyo kadlaha tabo kalaw dheere.
Kolay toban riyaad tahay adduun waydin tirayaaye,
Tunkaana waan ka soo xidhahayaa Timirki dheeraaye,
Ma baddaa tuldaha loola kici Tuurre naaxsadaye? !!
Tafantoofka gaalkuu u dilay waa tix geliyaaye,
Suuldaan Ruunna loo tebi inaan tuuladii gubaye,
Tulud uma godlaan reeruhuu tawl ka saanyadaye,
Anigana tis bay galay intaan col ugu taagnaaye,
Tima soohanloow Eebbahay kuma tabaaleeyo.
i find incredible that people like try to question the poet ability of one the greatest if not the greatest somali poet
