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Tis Wednesday...
Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 9:25 am
by Anab
On with the dance! Let joy be unconfined.
No sleep till morn, When Youth and Pleasure meet.
to chase the glowing hours with flying feet.
Lord Byron.
And the night shall be filled with music,
And the cares that infest the day,
shall fold their tents like the Arabs,
And as silently steal away.
Henry Wadsworth longfellow.
Tis Wednesday, the most Neutral day of all,
Just like me, the middle child-cutest of them all.
Oh so tall, oh so NEVER in love to fall.
Let my legs be unconfined.
Free to dance and stretch my soul out.
Rejoice in tis day before thursday and best of all- b4..Friday.
Open your legs and your hearts and let lust conquer the day!!!
Basra Elmi Bodheri - former Somalinet forumer.

:love:

Re: Tis Wednesday...
Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 9:27 am
by wastegal
Anab wrote:
Open your legs and heart and let lust conquer the day!!!

Re: Tis Wednesday...
Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 9:31 am
by Anab
Re: Tis Wednesday...
Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 9:39 am
by SummerRain
It's all I have to bring today
This and my heart beside
This and my heart, and all the fields
And all the meadows wide
Be sure you count should I forget
Some one the sum could tell
This, and my heart, and all the Bees
Which in the Clover dwell.

Re: Tis Wednesday...
Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 9:46 am
by Anab

Ismahaan that is a beautiful poem. By who?

Re: Tis Wednesday...
Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 9:49 am
by zulaika
ismahan,
i sense some sadness in that poem, wanna talk about it? come tell zuli all about it.
anab,
my oh my...i see u feeling very love'ish today.

Re: Tis Wednesday...
Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 9:53 am
by Anab
zulaika wrote:ismahan,
i sense some sadness in that poem, wanna talk about it? come tell zuli all about it.
anab,
my oh my...i see u feeling very love'ish today.

Zuli
How am i love-iish?
My poem is absolutely innocent.

Re: Tis Wednesday...
Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 10:02 am
by SummerRain
Anab wrote:
Ismahaan that is a beautiful poem. By who?

Emily Dickinson
Zul,
Its far from sad...actually its how you want to interpret it. What Emily is saying,atleast what I gathered is that everything comes down to love for her, and if she offered her heart, there is nothing greater she can offer.

Re: Tis Wednesday...
Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 10:24 am
by zulaika
Ismahan123 wrote:
Zul,
Its far from sad...actually its how you want to interpret it. What Emily is saying,atleast what I gathered is that everything comes down to love for her, and if she offered her heart, there is nothing greater she can offer.

and i gather u share her sentiments

Re: Tis Wednesday...
Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 10:33 am
by ms.nalia
and you had the audacity of calling me a slut...
pfff.....
Re: Tis Wednesday...
Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 11:49 am
by Anab
Ismahan who r u kidding??? Emily dickenson is the MOST depressed soul of all. The poem in fact sad but beautiful nevertheless. It has a substance of 'feelings' which is suprising that u would like it, ismahaan given that u are without feelings' bipolar. Forgive me, macaanto
The poem clearly is not about love as u state Ismahaan.
'what I gathered is that everything comes down to love for her, and if she offered her heart, there is nothing greater she can offer.'
Ismahaan, WRONG.
It is not about LOVE but about something else that i cannot put my fingers on. Clearly u r right when u say she is offering her heart. But she does offer something else as well. What is it-- is the big Question!!!
"It's all I have to bring today
This and my heart beside
This and my heart, and all the fields "
What is this other 'This" -- she is offering? IT cannot be love. Because love manifests itself as the 'heart' -- what is this 'this that she repeats three times in the poem.My summatation is-- this other -- 'this' is in fact-- her destituteness or her ugliness.or other unmentioned deficiencies. Forgive me all u all deficient forumers.

Clearly she is offering this' something else that does not have value. Something u can get for free like...natural beauty.....
And all the meadows wide
and all the Bees
Which in the Clover dwell.
I interpreted it as a poor little thing who is asking to be loved for who she is. A destitute maskinaad who knows the beauty of nature and freebies.

Re: Tis Wednesday...
Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 11:55 am
by Anab
Zuli and ismahaan
What is your opinions about my interpretations? Others are free to indulge as well.

Re: Tis Wednesday...
Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 12:20 pm
by SummerRain
Anab wrote:Ismahan who r u kidding??? Emily dickenson is the MOST depressed soul of all. The poem in fact sad but beautiful nevertheless. It has a substance of 'feelings' which is suprising that u would like it, ismahaan given that u are without feelings' bipolar. Forgive me, macaanto
The poem clearly is not about love as u state Ismahaan.
'what I gathered is that everything comes down to love for her, and if she offered her heart, there is nothing greater she can offer.'
Ismahaan, WRONG.
It is not about LOVE but about something else that i cannot put my fingers on. Clearly u r right when u say she is offering her heart.
But she does offer something else as well. What is it-- is the big Question!!!
"It's all I have to bring today
This and my heart beside
This and my heart, and all the fields "
What is this other 'This" -- she is offering? IT cannot be love. Because love manifests itself as the 'heart' -- what is this 'this that she repeats three times in the poem.My summatation is-- this other -- 'this' is in fact-- her destituteness or her ugliness.or other unmentioned deficiencies. Forgive me all u all deficient forumers.

Clearly she is offering this' something else that does not have value. Something u can get for free like...natural beauty.....
And all the meadows wide
and all the Bees
Which in the Clover dwell.
I interpreted it as a poor little thing who is asking to be loved for who she is. A destitute maskinaad who knows the beauty of nature and freebies.

Tell me basra, why do you think I dont have feelings? On the contrary, I think of myself full of emotions...

I see it as a lesson of life. When all worldly things are lost, all anybody can offer is the heart and nature's beauty. If anything, she is reminding us the heart is far more valuable and enough than anything else one can ever offer. And offcourse combined with natures beauty, one shouldn't ask for anything more.
Basra...as for your poems there is a theme and all it tell me is that last night you were in a state of ...whats the word......yes... libidinous
Tell me more about it abaayo
Re: Tis Wednesday...
Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 12:28 pm
by SummerRain
zulaika wrote:Ismahan123 wrote:
Zul,
Its far from sad...actually its how you want to interpret it. What Emily is saying,atleast what I gathered is that everything comes down to love for her, and if she offered her heart, there is nothing greater she can offer.

and i gather u share her sentiments

Today yes I do share her sentiment. Might be a different story tomorrow. My hormones are playing with me.

Re: Tis Wednesday...
Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 12:37 pm
by zulaika
Anab wrote:Zuli and ismahaan
What is your opinions about my interpretations? Others are free to indulge as well.

basra,
naa waxaan ku idhi, poems, parodies and all things anecdotal is your area of expertise, so my interpretations would fall short..therefore...to give you an answer, i will simply quote you:
"I interpreted it as a poor little thing who is asking to be loved for who she is"
^^
quite exemplary of dear basra don'tcha think?
