I'm writing a short story.

ire. · Post by **ire.** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 6:15 pm

A couple of the colleges I'm applying to give the option of submitting creative pieces of writing.

I'm writing a short story about an argument between a Somali mother and her daughter.

I’m trying to put a different twist on the clichéd generational, cultural gap scenario.

Once I’m done, is there anyone willing to critique it?

ire. · Post by **ire.** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 7:07 pm

lol, I should have known better.

Post by **FAH1223** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 7:10 pm

sure

my bro is also applying this weekend

Xamari_76 · Post by **Xamari_76** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 7:10 pm

Dont make it too long. Girl they don't even read that stuff you'd be surprised. You know how many applicants they get each semester.

ire. · Post by **ire.** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 7:17 pm

Oh, it won't be long; I think it'll ultimately be around 2,000 or so words.

Fah, could you message me your email?

Is your brother applying ED/EA? I don't think I'll be ready to send anything in until mid-December. :[

Thanks in advance! <3

Post by **SultanOrder** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 7:22 pm

That sounds interesting , if you wouldn't mind i would like to take a look at it myself also.

ModerateMuslim · Post by **ModerateMuslim** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 7:24 pm

boring.....

ire. · Post by **ire.** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 7:26 pm

Perfect_Order wrote:That sounds interesting , if you wouldn't mind i would like to take a look at it myself also.

Message me your email, if you don't mind.

Post by **FAH1223** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 7:47 pm

ire. wrote:Oh, it won't be long; I think it'll ultimately be around 2,000 or so words.

Fah, could you message me your email?

Is your brother applying ED/EA? I don't think I'll be ready to send anything in until mid-December. :[

Thanks in advance! <3

He is doing Priority deadline right now for University of Maryland - College Park and Baltimore County

Post by **SultanOrder** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 7:48 pm

Fah you read naruto today?

ire. · Post by **ire.** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 7:49 pm

Perfect, Naruto's awful now.

Kishimoto has no idea what he's doing.

Post by **FAH1223** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 7:51 pm

Perfect_Order wrote:Fah you read naruto today?

lol, i havent even watched the anime in a minute

i need to get hooked on another anime

MrPrestige · Post by **MrPrestige** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 7:51 pm

Ire what kind of Culture Gap's like the current situation of fish n chips somali daughters and their mother's if you are making a piece of it make it neautral not biased that will make readers lose interest

Post by **SultanOrder** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 7:53 pm

FAH1223 wrote:
Perfect_Order wrote:Fah you read naruto today?
lol, i havent even watched the anime in a minute

i need to get hooked on another anime

lol i see read i don't watch either i don't got time ment the manga

Post by **FAH1223** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 7:55 pm

nah havent read the manga man

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