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Post by lookz »

I wana to share something my head kicked out.
I know its long but U gotta look at this and read it carefully and try and understand it, read sum now and sum later if u have to, but u gotta read it all, coz it's real.REAL.Conjuction,conjunction, what is my function?

A SIMPLE EXPRESION

My kind words are like an examination//
Test your knowledge to the depth of your imagination//
To understand ‘em perfectly you need consolidation//
Of revision//
On a number of aspects of life’s provisions//
Therefore I’m not your competition //
I’m your mentor for supervision//
I’M your prescription//
You have permission//
To continue dissin’//
Those who diss disrespect the application/
Of my mission//
It’s your decision//
But until you find out your recognition what you’re missing//
You’re nowhere near this position//
So listen//
Check It –
like physics every action has equal or opposite reaction//
The worst initiation//
For a rhyming composition//
constant in cognition
that’s actually my perception//
In my head there is a Oppression//
a recollection of my nation//
goin against a stone age mission//
in thirst to complete each clan vision//
stand clear of my point, correction?
don't wana sound like Lauryn Hills assumption//
all I ask is ya attention//
so i can mention//
whats causin my tension//
i'm fallin apart in depression//
can't hardly enjoy lifes sensation//
can't hold together society...too much division//
plenty of commotion//
is too much Don't think i can hold up my emotion/
hold my hands up in submission//
still searchin for simple solution//
inside my war torn heart's residence//
no distance//
so is no sense//
to keep goin on wired fence//
believe me I now came to an end//
no reasons of trying to blend//
In the mix pot(london)I stand//
I’m obviosuly Somali //
From the African land//
The mother land//
who's thoughts differ and expand//
like anormous rubber band//
all i think of now is a plan//
whether a simple nomad can//
draw somewhat a diafran//
bring a peace that last on the Somaliland sand//
Hope ya understand//
tryin make ya feel me//
see my theory//
massege not subliminal, is clearly//
heart written, purely//
to you i'm writing this for sincerely//

-----Understand me, Seriously------
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Post by biko »

lost concentration somewhere between position and reaction, so me not understand you seriously!
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Post by lookz »

maybe if u read it well then u will
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Post by Adanna »

Personally, I dont like stuff that's predictible, I'd like to be suprised. Easier said than done huh? Well, training gives good skills as they say. Alle ha kuu fududeeyo.
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Post by lookz »

what u saying i aint got no skills??? Mad
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Post by Adanna »

No offocurse not hayati. If there's a will. Girl, I want to stand in line in 20 years to have a book signed by u, a somali nobel prize receiver. Just dont give up.
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