my first Af-Soomali love poem

[samadoon-waaxid]

I wrote this while ago to one of my jacayls,and just stumbled upon it tonight . its pretty amateurish but hope yall like it

_1_
hal abuurka erayga
hadalka murtida leh
hawrartaa maansada
cidlo lagama helo
waa hibo eebe bixiyo
aniguna aan qayb igu hagaagtay
farsamo aan ku habeeyay.

_2_

caawa anoo hurda
baa hilaac ii baxay
haatuf baa ii yemid
halkaan jiifay baan
hal mar ka booday
qalinkaan midigta la haleelay
gabayga ii haya baan
isleeyahay yaadan hilmaamin
hadafkayga wuxuu yahay
maanso inaan kuu hibaayo
oo hees kaaga tirsho halkan

_3_

hodaney hodaney
haboon badaney
hablaha oo idil
ugu qurux badnay
dayaxoo hogiisa ka soo baxay
tii lagu mitaalaay
hufnaanta dabeecada iyo
hab dhaqan wacany
haweenka oo idil
tii ugu horeesaay
hagoogta xishoodka iyo
smile aan la hilmaami karin
tii eebe hadiyad uu siyayee

_4_
hooyadii ku korisay iyo
hoygaad ku abaabtay
duco hor ilaahahey ah
ayaa igu hagaagsan
inaan halkan uu mariyo
_5_
geenyo la haweestaad tahay
hawd dalxiis loo geeyaad tahay.
kun halaad iyo hanti laga baxshaad tahay
gaafkeeda hirmahee iyo, heelo laga ciyaarad tahay.

[Executive]

you are pretty good saxiib

lol @ smile aan la hilmaami karin

[samadoon-waaxid]

you are pretty good saxiib

lol @ smile aan la hilmaami karin

the word smile was technical issue sxb.couldnt find a one word af-somali word that translates to smile.

[waryaa]

i voted although I didn't pass the 3rd o4 4th line. I did it because your somali literature skill is way better than mine. Did u copy/paste some lines? just curious

[samadoon-waaxid]

i voted although I didn't pass the 3rd o4 4th line. I did it because your somali literature skill is way better than mine. Did u copy/paste some lines? just curious

lol,u r a lazy reader sxb.the whole thing is mine,anyone can run it through google too but u suppose to be living in somalia bro.I thought polishing ur af-somali was a matter of survival for u.

[OliveOil]

NICE!!!


Smile-Dhoola cadayn

[siren]

I wonder who...

[samadoon-waaxid]

Oliveoil:dhol cadeyn is two words.i'm looking for one word.btw,is everything is ok?ma soo noqotay
Siren:well,kaama foga in terms of geography.but u dont know her

[OliveOil]

Yes Samadoon

[Advo]

I wonder who...

[waryaa]

geenyo la haweestaad tahay

To my understanding geenyo means horse/zebra cross-breed. If that's the case or it is any sort of horse, how could you call some1 you admire a horse?

Somalis say qoftas waa faras. It translates to that lady is a (freaking) horse

[samadoon-waaxid]

its a metaphor bro.from a somali point of view female horses are some of the prettiest creatures around,thus it makes sense to call a pretty girl geenyo.literal translation always sounds funny even from Eng to Somali. chick(young woman) would mean "digaagad/dooro dhalatay" in af soomali

[samadoon-waaxid]

I wonder who...

[Spursman]

[1_londoner]

^
Spursman did you manage to read all that? I thought the only soomali words you knew were...'Caadi iska dhig'.