Afsomali writing contest: seemeyer vs gedo_gurl

[Maandhow]

Write a 3 paragraph short short story. It has to be original material and you have to include a humorous ryhming verse.

The judges will be Noangst, Lamgoodle and myself (others can submit their votes as well) and you will be judged on the following areas:

Beginning: Does writer engage the reader's
attention immediately? Is tone, setting and
character established quickly? 4 points

Characterization: Are characters believable,
well-rounded? Actions and interactions
consistent and well motivated? 4 points

Plot: Does progression seem inevitable without
being too predictable? Is story interesting and
The game has same rules as others
compelling to read? 4 points

Conflict: Does protagonist have a problem
serious enough for the reader to care about? 4 points

Style: Is writing fresh and free of cliches?
Does it reveal writer's own vision and attitude
clearly? 4 points

Mechanics: Is grammar and punctuation correct?
Spelling accurate? 4 points

Good luck gentlemen.

[SahanGalbeed]

Seemeyer should be put against ximanjale .

[abuu_dujaana]

seemeyer surely you won't turn your back at her?

[Maandhow]

Gudiga garsoorka u qaabilsan qoraaladaan waa
NblueNwhite
Twist
Lamgoodle

[zingii]

seemeyer surely you won't turn your back at her?

thought was dude, a hommie, a faarax.

[ToughGong]

^
IT'S A QUESTION YOU DUMB CUNT

seemeyer surely you won't turn your back at her ?

gedo_gurl would wipe the floor with me

[zingii]

Caydu waa dambiyee carabkaaga ka adkow, hadaa nin tahay iyo hadaa naag tahay aday kuu taalaaye. Hadii lagu kululaysto miyaad iska caroon waaba yaabe?

[abuu_dujaana]

i have been informed that seemeyer is an einstein at writing.
Dont hide your light under a bushel.

[NewHargeisaGirl]

^^ I am madly in love with ya

[gedo_gurl]

^
IT'S A QUESTION YOU DUMB CUNT

seemeyer surely you won't turn your back at her ?

gedo_gurl would wipe the floor with me

Thats what a I call a gentleman

Contest over

[gedo_gurl]

BTW I really wish I could do this but it would take like half an hour or more.

[Maandhow]

BTW I really wish I could do this but it would take like half an hour or more.

The whole nation is behind you to support completely, so Wax lee iska soo xarxariiiq. Good luck

[Maandhow]

seemeyer if you fail to show up, I'm afraid you forfeit your chance

[abuu_dujaana]

The whole nation is behind you to support completely, so Wax lee iska soo xarxariiiq. Good luck

are you flirting or you just trying to lighten the mood?

[ToughGong]

Ku yar oo afar jiraa ayaa arkey Hooyadii oo uur leh
Markaasuu yidhi "Hooyo calooshaada maxaa ku jira"
Hooyadii baa tidhi "Allah Hooyo! walaalkaa oo yar baa ku jira"
Kii yaraa baa dabeedna yidhi "Hooyo miyaanad jecleen walaalkeyga yar":shock:
Hoyadii oo qosleysaa tidhi "Maxaan u jeclaan waayey Hooyo.Haa aad baan u jecelahay"
Kii yaraa baa ku celiyoo yidhi "Hadaad jeceshay maxaad u cuntey hadaa"