Afsomali writing contest: Monday vs Maand33q

[Maandhow]

Write a 3 paragraph short short story. It has to be original material and you have to include a humorous ryhming verse.

The judges will be Noangst, Lamgoodle and myself (others can submit their votes as well) and you will be judged on the following areas:

Beginning: Does writer engage the reader's
attention immediately? Is tone, setting and
character established quickly? 4 points

Characterization: Are characters believable,
well-rounded? Actions and interactions
consistent and well motivated? 4 points

Plot: Does progression seem inevitable without
being too predictable? Is story interesting and
The game has same rules as others
compelling to read? 4 points

Conflict: Does protagonist have a problem
serious enough for the reader to care about? 4 points

Style: Is writing fresh and free of cliches?
Does it reveal writer's own vision and attitude
clearly? 4 points

Mechanics: Is grammar and punctuation correct?
Spelling accurate? 4 points

Good luck gentlemen.

[SahanGalbeed]

She 's going to kill him

[abuu_dujaana]

She 's going to kill him

Monday possessed great writing skills
Monday come on finished off with style.

[Maandhow]

Gudiga garsoorka u qaabilsan qoraaladaan waa
NblueNwhite
Twist
Lamgoodle

[Saraxnow]

Maand33q

[Mondey]

Gabadh maxaa laigu hor keenay? ragii miyay madheen?

[abuu_dujaana]

Gabadh maxaa laigu hor keenay? ragii miyay madheen?

Mondey gabdhaha waxay mar walba aamin san yihiin in ay wiilasha kaga horeeyaan dhinaca qoraalka marka cashar heer sare ah u dhig

[ManD333q]

lol me in afsomali writing contest?..let med get back to this bal waa inoo iyo hadhoowto..wakhti xaadirkan arimo kale ayaan kujiraa

[Mondey]

Gabadh maxaa laigu hor keenay? ragii miyay madheen?

Mondey gabdhaha waxay mar walba aamin san yihiin in ay wiilasha kaga horeeyaan dhinaca qoraalka marka cashar heer sare ah u dhig

abu waan jeclaan lahaa, laakiin yartu waatan cudur daaratay markaa waan ka qalaynayaa

mandeeq waad fasaxantahay

[abuu_dujaana]

Well done Mandey that was comfortable victory.

[ManD333q]

Gabadh maxaa laigu hor keenay? ragii miyay madheen?

Mondey gabdhaha waxay mar walba aamin san yihiin in ay wiilasha kaga horeeyaan dhinaca qoraalka marka cashar heer sare ah u dhig

abu waan jeclaan lahaa, laakiin yartu waatan cudur daaratay markaa waan ka qalaynayaa

mandeeq waad fasaxantahay

alla mayee caliyoow naaceey..waar hadaadan meesha wax ku hayn dee aniga marmarsiiyo ha iga dhigan

[Mondey]

Well done Mandey that was comfortable victory.

indeed it was. but my pride wouldn't let me celebrate such victory.

so i'll just walk away.

[Mondey]

Mandeeq, u withdrew u lost.. game over

better luck next time

[Maandhow]

Well done Mandey that was comfortable victory.

indeed it was. but my pride wouldn't let me celebrate such victory.

so i'll just walk away.

Yaa Salaam

[ManD333q]

lool bal saddexdan sawir ee is sasabaya eega...

Isniin-boy whatever rocks ur bed