Poetry Slam

mcali · Post by **mcali** » Sun Oct 06, 2013 10:13 pm

never mind

my poems feel like my babies and I cant let them just be all alone.

mcali · Post by **mcali** » Sun Oct 06, 2013 10:28 pm

nnnnnnnnnoooooo

ihatewritingessays · Post by **ihatewritingessays** » Sun Oct 06, 2013 11:07 pm

C'mon share some of your poems!

InaSamaale · Post by **InaSamaale** » Sun Oct 06, 2013 11:20 pm

It was nice. You should have left it there.

Oh and I forgive you.

CushiticReflections · Sun Oct 06, 2013 11:33 pm

I don't understand how anyone could do that. Writing meaningful poetry is like tearing a piece of your soul and putting it on paper. To have your raw inner workings exposed like that can make one feel uncomfortably vulnerable.

hydrogen · Post by **hydrogen** » Mon Oct 07, 2013 5:42 am

Why do you always delete things? From the vocaroo to this.

mcali · Post by **mcali** » Mon Oct 07, 2013 7:34 pm

InaSamaale wrote:It was nice. You should have left it there.

Oh and I forgive you.

Post by **Basra-** » Mon Oct 07, 2013 7:40 pm

mcali reminds me of napoleon,
short, pout, and stoutly chameleon,
temper tantrum slam,
in an epic colossal sum.
Arrogant, gutsy but not seen.
Where are you? I cant see you, eye squinting keen,
Oh--there you are! Nice lifting stool!

mcali · Post by **mcali** » Mon Oct 07, 2013 7:41 pm

lol its just that I personally think some of my poems are really good.
Maybe one day I could do something with them

I do have a bunch of rejects that will post however to get things started.

InaSamaale · Post by **InaSamaale** » Mon Oct 07, 2013 7:48 pm

^

Post the other one.

mcali · Post by **mcali** » Mon Oct 07, 2013 7:51 pm

InaSamaale wrote:^

Post the other one.

come on man I actually like that one.

I feel comfortable posting my old material

they are really simple but have a clear meaning.

InaSamaale · Post by **InaSamaale** » Mon Oct 07, 2013 7:58 pm

Yeah, I really liked it too but fair enough.

mcali · Post by **mcali** » Mon Oct 07, 2013 8:26 pm

Join in guys

InaSamaale · Post by **InaSamaale** » Mon Oct 07, 2013 11:04 pm

So I thought I might give it a go. Poetry is hard since I'm naturally verbose.

My best-friend

Nothing more, than a figment
Of our wild imagination.
Some do not understand her,
But me, I am completely in awe.

Countless scenarios I conjure,
That encroach on my reality.
Whilst I busy myself with the 'what was',
I ignore the 'what is'.

So, my friend visits me,
Scolds my myopia,
Only then I see clearly.
With her advice, her sagacity.

All that I am,
All that I will be,
I owe, to my dear friend,
My best-friend, regret.

Post by **SultanOrder** » Mon Oct 07, 2013 11:46 pm

CushiticReflections wrote:I don't understand how anyone could do that. Writing meaningful poetry is like tearing a piece of your soul and putting it on paper. To have your raw inner workings exposed like that can make one feel uncomfortably vulnerable.

This is what I said a month ago.

Perfect_Order wrote:I think poems are much too intimate. When I read someones poem, I feel like I should lower my gaze.

MCAli, your voice notes never seem to work for me.

InaSamaale is a lesbian?

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