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hey evry1 ............. i wrote this imaginative writting as part of my asignment for my english class (A's) and umm i would grately apreciate your thoughts on what you think of it Very Happy ..................... i wrote a lot more but i thought i should ask what u guys and girls think of the first part (its not about me, just 4 the record that is lol) Very Happy

She should have never have given her heart, just for it to be crushed to pieces, as if to say it were a glass. How she herself into the situation where she was nothing but a sexual object, till this day she still doesn’t know. She though he loved her, she thought he cared about her, the way she loved and cared about him. Her idea of being in a relationship was the ‘fairy tale’ type, where your lover never would hurt or break your heart. Unfortunately for her she wasn’t in a fairy tale, she was in reality, and in reality fairy tales hardly ever come true, or in this case, not for her.
They met in the most unusual way; she was a quite girl, the sort of girl that hid her beauty, under her rather large reading glasses, and her immense college books. He was the ‘popular’ guy at college, tall, brown and handsome, friendly with anyone and everyone, all the girls wanted him, and all the guys envied him.
When she walked in and saw him sitting there, next to her seat, in the science class, made something in her heart beat so loud, she was sure someone had heard it. Usually if it had been anyone else, she would have caused mayhem, but since it was him, she just thanked her lucky stars. The minute she saw those “gorgeous” features on his face she automatically knew he was the ‘one’ for her, but if only she could talk to him, just saying hello, would have been a result to her. She slowly walked up towards her desk, looking down, grinning to herself. As she was walking, she noticed how his face lid up when he saw her. ‘Hello’ her face gazed up ‘you don’t mind me sitting here do you; I think I will concentrate more if I sit here’. Was he talking to her, she wasn’t sure, why would he talk to her, she was practically nobody, or so she thought she was. ‘Oh umm yeah you can sit here I don’t mind’ was just about all she managed to reply.

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very imaginative B.,...!! Smile
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Ummmm.......She's all that....the movie.

Hurry up to the bit where they fix the bytch up and who hit's it?
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thanx yung_gunn rose

lil - u still hating- i thought i told u to pull the trigger on your lil mouth Evil or Very Mad Rolling Eyes Laughing Laughing Laughing

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Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing

I aint hating and stop that...
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stop what Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
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Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing

stop it man
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tell me what to stop and i will innit Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
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Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing
stop it you eeeediat
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[quote="LilTrigger"]:lol: Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing
stop it you eeeediat[/quote]

about eeeeediat - is tht your somali way of saying idiott Confused

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THAT WAS GOOD SIS, I LIKED IT
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thanx rose
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[quote="xmyway

about eeeeediat - is tht your somali way of saying idiott Confused

Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Rolling Eyes Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing[/quote]


that one looks lonely .. Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing

and no it isnt..
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[quote="LilTrigger"]
that one looks lonely quote]
a bit like you innit Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing
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