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Damal

Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2017 8:30 am
by AwRastaale

Re: Damal

Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2017 9:16 am
by mahoka
Nice advert

Re: Damal

Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2017 1:26 am
by Siciid85
Beautiful hotel.

Re: Damal

Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2017 1:59 am
by bumps
Such a good advert. Most Somali adverts are loud and stupid.

Nice hotel too.

Re: Damal

Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2017 2:43 am
by AwRastaale
The ad content can improve in terms of terminology and wording. They inserting too many dhaqancelis terms. Are you speaking English or Somali? What is quality in Somali? Is raaxo the right term to use for a business trip? Istarex?
Nafis?

Also could be shorter and more relaxing music if their message is good place to rest after hard work.

I say 30-60 seconds are enuff to deliver the core message but Somalis make ads as if they makkng Bollywood movie without all the neat editing and action pack.

Re: Damal

Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2017 4:05 am
by Siciid85
Quality is "Tayyo " in Somali. We are slowing eroding authentic Somali language with foreign tongues.

Re: Damal

Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2017 3:48 pm
by AlXaaj
It's a little bit too much. Needs to be more simple.
But it's much better than the other ads packed with 'gabayo' and useless stuff.

By the way does anyone know the rate for 1 night and food prices ?

Re: Damal

Posted: Thu May 04, 2017 5:31 am
by AwRastaale
Part two, much better.