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Spoken Rhymes:

Posted: Sun May 07, 2006 3:39 pm
by lookz
Spoken Rhymes:

Why does the End, seem so similar like the beginning?
Its just seems bit too confusing, mixed up with delusion,
My story -is nothing like her-story, not even close to his-story,
So macaan basically means, you dont know me!
But that’s how I express, when I’m in distress,
Poetry is my essence, my love-nest,
The way I pronounce the words so fast,
People say, WHOA! How do you do this Miss?
It’s a talent that I was provided,
Even though I was never guided,
I’m here to enlighten the brightness of your mind,
If you truly feel my words, than be kind, and say the following line,
I’M A BLACK WOMAN, A BRIGHT BLACK BEAUTIFUL WOMAN,
A NOMAD WITH NO LAND, STRONGER THAN FOUR MEN,
Brother I’m not joking, --so don’t test me,
‘Cause you might be –strong physically, but I still control you mentally,
And sexually, ehem!
I keep myself attractive, basically meaning I’m not sexually active,
But it’s lack of –knowing not to slack of,
I don’t jerk off –like many men,
I’m a virgin, that knows many things,
I mean, I have many friends,
But that’s besides the point I’m trying to prove, so I move,
I’m not the kind, that writes, “Dear Poetry,”
I’m more like –the one who fights the rights of me,
Intellectually and poetically perfected,
Hate and violence I neglected,
It’s hectic, how the world is full of conflicts,
But peace, would put ease –into human beings,
That’s why –we cry and realize that life –is more than movies,
Because the death you see –on TV
-and the father that shed their tears,
-and the mothers that couldn’t find their babies for years,
Now that’s not produced by Steven Spielberg or played by Arnold the Hero,
Why is –tomorrow-getting too narrow-and why can’t we lead instead of fallow?
If in God we trust, than why we need GEIGO?
It’s life that we strive, trying to live against the rights –of others,
Kill Bill or get killed for not killing Bill,
Now you tell me why HIV haven’t found pill to cure the ill??
And why people in Africa are still starving like Ally McBeal?
Its how life goes, it gets faster, and that’s real.

Posted: Sun May 07, 2006 3:41 pm
by YunG_GuNNN
is that a life story cutey?

Posted: Sun May 07, 2006 3:42 pm
by Rudegal
lookz Wink Razz

Posted: Sun May 07, 2006 3:43 pm
by lookz
Rudegal
Smile Wink

and youngin if u aint got nuffing nice to say dnt say nuffing

Posted: Sun May 07, 2006 3:45 pm
by curious_gurl
nice 1 Exclamation

Posted: Sun May 07, 2006 3:46 pm
by $un$hine
Whoa...De ja vu!!

Laughing

Wink

Posted: Sun May 07, 2006 3:47 pm
by Mizzy--Dime
ALLY MCBEAL AHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA REMINDS OF THIS ANOREXIC B!TCH...AT MA SKUUL Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing

Posted: Sun May 07, 2006 3:48 pm
by lookz
$un$hine u da only one who makes sence in dis place................. Rolling Eyes

Posted: Sun May 07, 2006 3:49 pm
by Dun
You've posted this before.

It's ok.

It's not going to get better every time you post it.

Posted: Sun May 07, 2006 3:50 pm
by $un$hine
Laughing Luks i knw!! Very Happy

Ignore them...

They lack the intellect to understand! Laughing

Posted: Sun May 07, 2006 4:29 pm
by WaarYaaHaa
[quote="Dun"]You've posted this before.

It's ok.

It's not going to get better every time you post it.[/quote]

Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing sory 4 laughin walahi dis niga made me crease up...

ANYWAYZ HATS OFF 2 U YUNG LADY, UR A POETICAL MYSTERY, KEEP BEING OUTSPOKEN AND THEORETICAL, AND MAYBE U WILL SURPRISE URSELF!

Posted: Mon May 08, 2006 6:05 am
by LilTrigger
Loooooooool Dun u joker