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!!LOOKZ with another poem THIS IS a most read!!!

Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 5:16 am
by lookz
THE WORLD

This is a world of wonders and wizards
A world of wishes and worshippers,
A world of miracles and magnificent manners
This is A New World Where We Live and Die
This is a world of scavengers and strangers
This is a world where lunatics become automatically healed
Where we as Somalis cannot live with out our roots
Somalia how ever is a world where there is no patience and participation
Now I suddenly remember that this is a new world
Not the previous not the one where Somalia/Somaliland lived together in happiness and harmony
This is the final one, the unfortunate one
Which contains death and deadly diseases
Corruption lies and nuclear pollution
Where the sinner is chosen before the saint
Where society prefers the illiterate to the articulate
This is a world with gangsters, thugs, robbers and rulers
But one thing is need in order for us to survive that is to trust your instincts and be a responsible human being
No one will pave the way for you, pave it yourself
For this is a new world my bother and sisters
This is a new world where the land of my forefathers is bleeding from the deep wounds of her
Pretty flesh.
This is a world that I cannot ignore im so sore
They digged me deep down the core
Oh lord hel us
Why can we not live in peace with out war?
This is a world where we are blinded from the truth
Where we live by many rules
This is a world with to many crazy people on the loose
We got politicians who act the fool
All we need is peace
Especially in the Middle East

Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 7:28 am
by Basra-
It is missing Uusboo & Xaawashi!~ ! Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes

Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:10 am
by Grant
There are some interesting thoughts in there, but It reads like at least two incomplete poems stuck together.

Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:17 am
by Unclebin
Basra

Its also missing maraaq magee

Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 10:57 am
by lookz
basra whats up with you rolling your eyez......

u either liked the poem or you didnt.....

Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 1:26 pm
by xoogSADE14
sh!t sukked Exclamation i'll let you know why after i read it Laughing

Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 1:28 pm
by Nabeela
Nice...Keep up the good work.

Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 1:33 pm
by lookz
THANX.... AND THOSE OF YALL THAT AINT GOT NUFFING NICE TO SAY I AINT EVEN GONNA BOTHER AND REPLY TO UR COMMENTS.. COZ IM BETTER THEN THAT..... Cool

Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 1:37 pm
by fagash_killer
nice we need mo poems like this keep it up

Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 1:37 pm
by Cawar
[quote="Basra-"]It is missing Uusboo & Xaawashi!~ ! Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes[/quote]

Basra you cant say Uusboo and then add Xawaashi...its either cusbo and xawaash or uusbo and hawaash....make up your mind Ms. Laughing Laughing


Lookz I think you personify the dumb but good looking woman..at least i hope I am right abt the lookz. Laughing

Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 1:37 pm
by Cheroke
Not bad, But I think your prior one was better, Keep up the good work though.

Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 1:39 pm
by fagash_killer
[quote="Cheroke"]Not bad, But I think your prior one was better, Keep up the good work though.[/quote]

no this is better that before was full of isaaqland but this 1 represent our country

Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 1:52 pm
by Cheroke
[quote="fagash_killer"][quote="Cheroke"]Not bad, But I think your prior one was better, Keep up the good work though.[/quote]

no this is better that before was full of isaaqland but this 1 represent our country[/quote]

Aren't you gadabuursi ? What is this hatred that you have isaaqs ? You guys intermarry one another like everyother day.

Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 1:57 pm
by fagash_killer
yeah i am i dont hate any 1 i just believe in unity lakiin those guys waa dad paranio ah wallahi

but i should say vise versa they hate us cuss of dahir riyaale they putted him their and what is suddenly they are screaming faqash and ex nss first they said he is unguilty and now suddenly guilty if they forgived him and he is guilty than why cant they forgive morgan c/yusuf etc the q still remains than what is the real reason they guys went solo cuss its not on the siyaad barre issue these guys lied to us these guys hate evrything than non isaaqs but if they want to call ppl faqash than i should say call those idoors their in the goverment faqash no but than is it they are traitors but when it comes to samaroon and to non isaaqs than is it hey they were always our enemies since we know them as faqash thats what i mean these guys are paranio sool sanaag awal are part of republic of somalia if hargeysa burco berbera want to go solo fine for me but dont just claim other mans grounds

Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 2:13 pm
by Cheroke
FK, I think you worry to much man, Regardless if isaaqs dislikes the likes of faqash and any other nonisaaq, They are our brothers and we constantly interbreed with one another, Its good that we keep our alliance bond together the gadabuursi, Isse and isaaqs, and remain the peaceful people we are. But remember though when push comes to shove, we’re Dir one of ancient tribes, we’ll eventually push back, Until than Viva Awdal, Borama, and Djibouti. And alsp wagooyi brothers.