Enlightened Minds only....

[Basra-]

Ok i composed this poem in a fit of fury anger --while reading an article the star tribune-- some lame african american woman --dissed beyounce by calling her 'country'. Now i like Beyounce simply because she is beautiful--nothing more. Ok her songs are cute as well. But what i pissed of at was this black woman who was hating her simply because she is beautiful--i felt personally attacked--i mean as a beautiful, prejudiced beautiful woman. So i sent her an email-- actually--i sent her this poem to her to emphasize her ---'Whiteyness'.


Now here is where you come in: --Tell me --academically speaking that how the poem comes out.(And i mean with insightful dissection of the poem, enlightened comments--u know--go Full academic).



My question is--due to my confined,& unfortunately restricted artistic license--did my point come across in this poem? And what point came out exactly? Thank you for you help.

Here is the poem.

Mirror Mirror on the wall,

WhoÂ’s the WhitestÂ’ of them all?

Why—its you-Caramel Joy,

Thank You! Thank You! She jumped so tall,

I am so articulate; I am so not black,

I think i am Queen of Denial, certainly not Wack,

I am no country like Beyonce,

She ran with profound sell out glee across the hall,

To hug her idol Uncle White Tom; trying pretentiously not to fall.

[Enemy_Of_Mad_Mullah]

basra only for u ->

[Basra-]

Well Enemey?? Your comments??

[Enemy_Of_Mad_Mullah]

i smell Ugaali are u gorging again

[Basra-]

what is ugaali? and what is gorging? Caudubilaahi--Enemy are you high? Tanzanian brewed beer???

[DANGIRL]

Its Beyonce not beyounce.

[Basra-]

[quote="DANGIRL"]Its Beyonce not beyounce. [/quote]


Oooops thanks Ogaden girl for correcting me---Erryaaa--very sweet of you.

[Basra-]

Seriously???? No enlightened minds? How pathetic!

[Enemy_Of_Mad_Mullah]

[quote="Basra-"]Seriously???? No enlightened minds? How pathetic! [/quote]


deleted my post

[Ashlee]

you're a bedridden fatass who gets air-lifted out of her bedroom.

[DANGIRL]

During my nap, I farted many times, I was told later. Of course, I denied those allegations. I have a patented method of passing gas I refer to as the diguise-o-fart. While farting, I loudly clear my throat. Timing is everything with this type method when releasing gas into the air.

[Basra-]

Errryyaaa how disgusting.

[DANGIRL]

[michael_ital]

My edits

Mirror Mirror on the wall,

WhoÂ’s the WhitestÂ’ of them all?

Why—its you-Caramel Joy,

Thank You! Thank You! She jumped so tall,

SOOO articulate, And SOOO not black,

The Queen of Denial, SOOO (or "DEF") not Wack,

I'm no country like Miss Beyonce,

No bumbpkin, or a Texas dunce

She shrilled with profound sell out glee from across the hall,

Hugging her idol Uncle White Tom; trying pretentiously not to fall.

[Basra-]

Excellent Mikey. You captured the valley Blondie Barbie doll essence. Applause! I wish i had consulted you before sending her the poem.